Zhuolin


Week 15 (21)

The year 2020 has been sad (adjective 形容词 ). One reason (why) is because of the coronavirus.
The second reason (why) is because I can't go back to china and i can’t play with my friend.
I will always remember the year 2020 because coronavirus made me can’t play with my friend.
In the year 2020 I hope the coronavirus has been.
I also hope that I can go back to China and play with my chinese friend.



    
       

Week 13 (21)Your directions were to use the words Miss Olivet gave you to write a story. You did a good job using the words:

It was a sunny day. We went to an interesting museum. We were excited, because there were many things there. There were some dinosaur fossils, pictures and stores. First we saw some giant t-rex fossil. It was cool.

Naxt we saw some pterosaur fossils on the ceiling. Then we went to the restaurant and ate some delicious hamburgers. After that, we got lost. Then, we found the way. Naxt we saw a Triceratops fossil and there was a corner on his head. Then we saw some pictures and they were beautiful. At last, we went home and we were happy!

Week 11 (21)Your directions were to use the words Miss Olivet gave you to write a story. You did a good job using the words:

It was a sunny day. We went to the beach. Everyone was excited. There was sand, ocean, people, boats and  stores. First we build a sand castle, and everyone likes my castle and my brother's castle. Next we played beach ball. My team won the game. Then we ate some ice cream and hot dog for lunch and everyone said it was delicious. After that we swam in the ocean and the ocean was cold. Then we boated on the ocean and we had a race and I won the race. At last we went home and we are happy!



Week 10 (21) Your directions were to use the words Miss Olivet gave you to write a story. You did a good job using the words:


It was a sunny day. We went to an amusement park. First we played roller coasters and everyone is Shouted like waaaaaaa! Next we play Carousel and it is fun. Then we ate hot dogs for lunch and everyone said yummy. After that we played bumper cars and bumper cars sound like bump bump. At last we went home and we were happy!


Week 9 Your directions were to use the words Miss Olivet gave you to write a story. You did a good job using the words:
It was a sunny day and we went to the zoo!First we saw some monkeys.Next we saw some lions.Then we saw some penguins.Last,we went home and i am so happy.

Week 7 (21)

There once was a dog with fluffy, brown fur named Brownie who loved to dance! He danced all over town. Everyone loved to watch Brownie dance. It made everyone so happy!



One day Brownie was dancing on the concrete stairs in front of the town’s bank. He fell and he hurt his leg. Brownie cried. He went to the hospital. His leg was put in a cast, but there weren’t anymore crutches. So, all of his friends bought him a beautiful scooter to ride on and he was so happy! The scooter was red, which was his favorite color!

Week 4 (21)

Zhuolin-I am proud of how you are learning to write in English.  Here is your piece about your weekend:



Over the weekend I went to the grocery store. We bought food. I went with my mom and my brother

Then,I watched t.v on the weekend.

Naxt, I cooked scrambled eggs with tomatoes for dinner.

After that,I play games with my brother.

Finally, I went to sleep at night. What a great weekend.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Zhuolin
    I liked your story because you told us about your weekend .What did you get in the shop?
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    From Matthew.

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  2. zhoulin i like your story what did you do else on the weekend?


    from, brian.L

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  3. great job on your story I liked how you described your weekend! ~Lizzie

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  4. Hi Zhuolin,
    I like your stories because they are interesting and you tell us about what you did. Great story. From Kyle. Here is the link to our class blog so you can visit it sometime if you would like to: https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

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