Theo

Week 35 (21)

“Which way to the shops?” I panted. He pointed the way.

 When I was walking out of the spice shop when BOOM! A giant metal man came crashing down from the heavens and left a crater in the middle of the road. I ran into the nearby alley and became… Elemental! I Ran out and gave him a big boulder to the face but it didn’t do anything. Then I remembered that all metals have a melting point. I threw lava balls right at his chest. “NOOOOOO” he cried out horrifically.

“I’ll leave the cleanup for the cops,” I mumbled. 


Week 34 (21)

I did it! I bought the Transportation 2000! It looks like a normal car but it can sense the terrain underneath and turn into whatever it needs to be. At first I didn’t know it could fly! Now I spend a lot of time in the sky. Also, now that I’m in the sky there’s no speed limit. Also, I can sail out on the water when I put it in boat mode. Soon after, I discovered I could go into space. Oh did I mention that I spent all my bank money? But boy it was definitely worth it!

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My grandpa is my favorite person in the world. He may be wrinkled and scarred but his heart doesn’t even have a bruise. My grandpa tells me stories like the time he canoed out on lake erie with his birch wood oars. He was wistful of those days. Another story my grandpa told me was when he broke the mushroom rule when he accidentally touched a mushroom in the amazon, lucky for him it wasn’t poisonous. My grandpa is a brave and kind hearted man and he is my hero. I remember the days when he was there for me.

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John and I were walking down Crow Lane when we came up to house number 29. It was an old abandoned house that looked like it could be blown down with the slightest gust of wind. “I dare you to go in there and say hello to the scary ghosts!” John said, chuckling a little. 

“Ok,” I said, shaking furiously. Then I started up the driveway and once I got inside I started shivering. Also there was a yellow glow coming from the dining room. When I walked in I thought it was a dream, my mouth dropped open. GOLD!


Week 28 (21)

As it let out a pitiful howl, the wolf trotted through the winter moonlight. Trees surrounded the wolf and seemed to be creeping in towards her deep in the Yukon territory where the winter nights never ended. Then the wolf spotted a hare and started creeping in closer and closer. Then she pounced and caught the hare and blood stained the snow and the wolf had a feast. After the feast the wolf headed back to the den with the remains of the hare to feed to two hungry wolf pups and then they snuggled together to slumber upon nighttime.

Week 27 (21)

The Purple Elephant Parade was doing their happy dance up and down Broadway.One of the elephants was playing his painted violin while balancing on a giant ball. The parade group was celebrating 200 years of pride, fun, and elephants.It was all coming to NYC (New York City). I love to see them on TV so I was super excited to learn that they were coming here. Now I could see a  plane with a banner streaming along behind it saying “200 years of elephants from 1821 to 2021.” It was a great experience to be with the elephants. 

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No, I said, “I like Marmite.”

“You know you don’t have to have some if you don’t want it.” my Aunt said. 

“It’s okay I’ll try it.” Wondering what it would taste like. Would it taste good or taste bad I wasn’t sure but I knew that it had a bad name. 

“Lunch is ready dear.” my Aunt called from the kitchen. Here it was the moment of truth. Will it taste good or bad so I took a bite out of my sandwich and OMG it tasted so good so I took another bite. And now I’m a fan.



Week 25 (21)

BOOM BOOM! A giant metal Statue was walking down Monarch street and all the people were screaming and yelling! “What is that!” someone screamed. 

“I don’t care what it is but I’m getting out of here!” someone else said. There was havoc on Monarch street. Then Blaze Boy came out of nowhere and punched him 

“Super, did you think you can stop me?” the Statue said in a cold voice.

“Why do you think I’m here?” he replied. Then Blaze Boy pulled out a rope and he quickly tied Statue up and Statue fell. Another heroic day for Blaze Boy! 



Week 24 (21)

Hello from the planet Fuzzia where everyone is a ball of fuzz that can walk and talk and they are all different colors. Here we have a normal seven story high house. There was a quiet game match last Suterday and of course the orange one spoke first. Oh and there is Fuzz Park where the first ever fuzzathalon was held and the team Target won! A normal meal is usually purple burgers and what humans call cashews. Did you know that someone found fiber in the mountains? That's so rare!

Can’t wait for you to come! Your friend, Joey.


Week 23 (21)

              

Never kick a big brown balloon or you’ll be kicked. I learned this the hard way and it was frightening. But today I’m going to get revenge on that balloon once and for all by popping it. I’ve come equipped with a needle for popping, a pink balloon to act as bait, a marker, and cheetos if I get hungry. Now it’s time to take the balloon down. First I drew a funny face on the balloon and got the needle ready as the brown balloon drew near and then POP! The balloon fell to the ground: brown balloon conquered.

Week 22 (21)

 Now it’s time for an interview with my kitten Desmond using an animal translator 

Q:  What’s it like to be a cat?

A: It's nice you can stay home and sometimes get to go onto the tv and watch James Bond and do kitty stuff.

Q: Like what?

A: I like to sleep and play and most of all eat! But where the food goes is still a mystery among most felines. 

Q: Do you like your humans?

A: Of course, after all they are the ones who feed me.

Coming up next, Jerry the giraffe and his juggling skills. 





Week 20 (21)

VROOOOOM! Just then the bikers were starting on their final lap. It was the final race of the year. The team Watermelon was in the lead. Jon Long was arguably the best biker in the world but he was being chased by team Limes Loo De Loop.

It was a neck and neck competition and none of them were backing down! Lime, watermelon, lime, watermelon, lime, watermelon. It just kept going back and forth. There was no determining a winner yet! Now the finish line was in sight then team lemon came out of nowhere and won the race! How?



Week 18 (21)

“MOM!” I yelled.

“YES?” she yelled back. She was coming up the stairs just then.

“Can I go to John's house please?” I asked. Now I was looking greedily at the hershey kisses bowl on the counter desperate to taste that chocolate sensation in my mouth. 

“Fine you can have a small piece of chocolate and yes you can go over to John’s house. I’ve already warned John’s mom about your peanut allergy” Mom said.

“THANKS MOM!” I yelled. And I got on my yellow bicycle and started down the  long, steep, bumpy driveways and onto the long bumpy road.



Week 16 (21)

I touched a fossil and all of a sudden I hovered above ground. Everything around me was changing. I saw mammoths, meteors, and dinosaurs. 

Then suddenly everything stopped and I hit the ground super hard. 

Then the ground started to rumble and I saw a group of stegosaurus rumble past me. 

“I'M 67 MILLION YEARS BACK!” I yelled. I was super scared. What do I do? How do I get back? Then I heard a soft voice, “ Follow the group of stegosaurus and you will find what you are looking for. Sure enough there was the fossil to go home.



Week 14 (21)


Jonathan somehow got dragged into going to a fashion show. He felt like he would go to sleep standing there so he started pacing back and forth for a long time until he noticed a chair place. 

Jonathan: Can I go get a chair please?

Jonathan’s sister: Yes.

Jonathan: Yay!

Jonathan’s sister: After this person. 

Jonathan: Dang it.

5 people later.

Jonathan: I’m just going to go get a chair. 

Jonathan’s sister: Oh fine. 

Jonathan: Finally I can take a long deserved nap.

Later when they were going home. 

Jonathan’s sister: That was lovely.

Jonathan: yes that nap was lovely.

Week 11 (21)

 

It was another fall day guarding the castle. When all of a sudden I saw a white blob behind the leaves coming over the hill I zoomed in with my telescope and saw it was the evil barbarians. It looked like they were attacking the town so I sounded the emergency horn. Not long after that the gates came rolling down. We mowed the barbarians down but one crafty guy tried to sneak away but he didn’t get very far before an arrow found his back, that was it. And after every single battle the soldier's feast, it was awesome.



Week 10 (21)

Happy Monkey Circus had made it to New York City. The trucks were coming down Broadway. 

I could see the lions were being unloaded off the trucks. All of a sudden the lion cage opened a little. If only it was a bit smaller it would have gotten out and terrorized New York. Luckily someone closed the cage and the lion went back to pacing back and forth in his cage. 

Soon my favorite animals, the monkeys, came out of the back of the truck bouncing around their cage as usual. I could tell this would be another awesome circus.

 

Week 9 (21)


They thought the toy army men would do it. they thought the swat action figure would do it. they  thought the lego police men would do it. NO we did it and we’re just toy painters. It all started when we were painting the toy elementary school. When the scary bee attacked us we decided to defend but all of a sudden the pointy thing hit Mark in the leg. He was screaming in pain. He fell to the ground but then something weird happened. The bee died. We shouted hooray and I finished the painting job and got paid.


45 comments:

  1. the part when you said that you got paid for painting the tiny school
    logan gates ges at fms

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  2. I like the fact that you list all toy army men and when Mark got hit by the pointy thing and when you said "something weird happened. The bee died." and you all shouted hooray. Luki nice job Theo cant wait to read the next one.

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  3. this story is very funny well the part they painted the school someone got killed and they got paid i feel like it was supposed to be very dramatic and i liked that

    from:ken

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  4. that was a super good book especially when you said you were a painter instead of a army man or swat or police and when I remember the picture it does look like the people are painters

    Anthony

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  5. I loved your story! I loved how it was very weird. Like how it said "When the skary bee ataked us we desied to defened but all af a sudden the ponty thing hit Mark in the leg.The bee died."
    ~Soleil Dupuis

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  6. I was a bit confused when you said if only 'it' was a bit smaller as the last thing you wrote about was the gate rather than a lion (previously it was lions), but I figured it out in the end. Monkeys are a lot of fun but my favourite are the penguins.

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  7. loved the happy ending to the story! good job :)

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  8. hi !theo. i liked all your stories it was awesome . i liked it all . well done . you are creative a lot . - suzanna saar cherian

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  9. theo on week 14 I like how you added how jonathan and his sister were talking together

    mason

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  10. Your week 14 Was Really funny!

    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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  11. YOUR WEEK 14 IS SO FUNNY the funniest place is at the end "yes that nap was lovely"
    -Ahmet

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  12. Theo, I like Week 18 Because you put loud parts in all caps!

    -Elliott

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  13. I like your story because it was funny I loved it still laughing From,Henry Rivas

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  14. your week 23 was really funny

    from: Ari

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  15. Your week 10 was very interesting and the fact that you put in the part were you said "the monkeys, came out of the back of the truck bouncing around the cage as usual." Great job Theo keep writing. Luki :)

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  16. I really like your question answer format in week 22 ~ellie

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  17. week 23 was really creative
    logan

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  18. I love your week 23! It is silly that you have to make a whole plan just to pop a balloon! You a re very creative with your story's! Keep up the good work,
    -Katherine

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  19. I liked week 22 it was very funny great job theo.
    -Brian

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  20. i liked your week 23 it was fun
    Mir

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  21. I like your week 24, it is funny!

    -Dominic

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  22. Theo nice job with the fuzzlathon inspiration on your week 24
    -Brian J.

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  23. I really like how in week 25, You had a set up with A villain and a hero. ~Ellie

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  24. Hi Theo
    I liked how your character was unsure if he would like it even though he said he did. Keep writing. Crosby

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  25. Week 26 is very funny!
    -Jennavieve

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  26. Dear Theo,
    I really liked your week 26 And how you found out you actually liked marmite.Luki ๐Ÿคœ๐Ÿค›๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

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  27. I like how you turned out to like marmite.
    -Brian Jiang

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  28. Hi Teho,
    I really liked your week 26 and how you wanted to try it and now you are a fan. Great work!
    ~Lizzie Lamme

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  29. Theo your Marmite story was so funny
    keep up the good writing

    From
    Henry Rivas :^)

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  30. Theo,
    Your week 27 story is well done! I like when you said "The Purple Elephant Parade was doing their happy dance"
    Keep up the awesome writing

    Gemma Sela๐ŸŒบ

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  31. I like that in your 100 word you made the ending sad good job.
    mason

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  32. I like your week 29, I like how you left a cliffhanger on seeing gold!

    -Dominic

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  33. Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)May 5, 2021 at 1:13 AM

    Week 29 -
    Hello Theo,

    You caught my interest from the moment I started reading your well written story. Your first paragraph set the scene of a possibly scary encounter. As I read on I found rather than ghosts you found gold.

    You certainly know how to capture the interest of your readers and the quality of your writing, including the use of punctuation, shows you are develop good writing skills. Keep writing and sharing!

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  34. Hello! I love your week 10! I like were it said "Soon my favorite animals, the monkeys, came out of the back of the truck bouncing around their cage as usual. I could tell this would be another awesome circus." Ok bye!
    ~Soleil

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  35. hi theo I liked your week 29 100 wc because there was basically a plot twist
    keep writing
    Anthony

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  36. Dear Theo, I really liked your week 29 the house was scary at first but then when you saw the yellow glowing you thought it was gold I wonder if it was just a gold light and it was a trap or something. Great job Theo keep writing. Luki ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ‘

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  37. Hi theo! I liked your week 29 it is so good! I like the part where you go in and find gold!
    Ella

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  38. theo i love the detail how you said the house looks like it could be knocked down with a gust of wind.Joey

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  39. Dear Theo, week 31 was really nice. Luki ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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  40. Dear Theo, I really liked your week 28 and I liked the end part of your story it was cooled that they all curled up. Luki๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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  41. week 34 was very detailed good job
    Lily

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  42. Dear Theo, week 34 was cool I wish we could have a car like that now but it's going to be like 2100 when they make a car like that and even if I had to give up all my money I would still buy it. Luki๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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  43. Hello, I liked your week 35 when you were defecting the person!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Ella C4๐Ÿ˜ถ‍๐ŸŒซ️

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  44. I liked your week 35 100 wc because it was mysterious when you went into the ally and became a super hero
    Anthony

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