Suzanna

Week 30 (21)

“Ahh!” Susan screamed ,because the electricity shut down. What happened was ,Susan was so scared and sleeping with her lights on because there was lightning outside, but suddenly ,darkness enveloped the room . “Ahh!” Susan screamed that was what happened . She was screaming and shivering because the light went out ,but with her braveness she went down stairs, took her torch and turned on the flashlight. When she calmed her mind, she screamed again, “Ahh!” The flashlight also shut off because the battery was low . Then a shadow appeared back of her and without even looking she fainted on the floor .

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     Sam heard from his mom that no one was coming to his birthday party.

 After he heard that, he dragged himself upstairs to his room feeling terrible that no one decided to come to his party. Sam kept on saying this phrase, “What if I don’t come to your birthday parties won’t you feel sad?'' He just couldn't believe what happened! 

One thing that Sam didn't realize is that you don’t know what really happened, maybe they have something going on and they are very busy.  

Billy, Sam’s friend, knew his house number twenty-nine and wished him a happy birthday.



Week 28 (21)

If you heard  my dog got injured last night , I will tell you what really happened . So it was late midnight around 1:00 or 2:00 . I left my dog inside the cage , but inside my pocket there was a blade. I did not see it fall down . So then after keeping my dog in the cage ,I went straight to bed . I turned my light off as it let out a pitiful howl  . I  understood it was my dog. I went straight to the dog cage to see if it was really injured .  It  was just an accident .

Week 27 (21)

There  was a mad mad scientist,

I don’t know how a mad person can be a scientist ,but let it get going on .

For one of his mad experiments ,he used an elephant , violin, purple spray and paint .

So he went on to start his experiment .

He painted the elephant ,”NO ONE WOULD DO THAT” but the mad scientist will . 

After painting the elephant he sprayed pink on the elephant again . 

What would the elephant think ,

He is mad mad mad a lot .

The scientist was happy that his mad experiment worked and then, for his happiness he played violin . 


GES ONLY week

          Starting in the early morning Manna ran to the pool , but she did not want to swim. She wanted to climb that red ladder and take the packet of  chocolate coins from the top .  But when she climbed the ladder and took the coins , she tripped and fell down in the swimming pool; all the coins except for one were not sinking . The coin which was not sinking was on the pavement when manna ran to take it , a car came and went over it . Then she was so sad and angry that she ran and broke the car's wheel .

Week 26 (21)

  Who knows me better Angela asked Manna and Sara . They understood that it was going to be a war with them both . They ran, put on a  war dress and were ready . Angela told , girls to be ready. There is only one question and one chance to win . Whoever wins, knows me better . What is my favorite food? asked Angela , Manna answered pizza , no Sara said then she said KFC . Angela got so sad , then no she said , ‘I like Marmite . Just because they did  not know Angela better ,  she was sad  . Angela  then , cried and ran to her room .

Week 25 (21)


Sara and immaculate were playing  hide and seek, they  made a card of hide and seek . First Immaculate took  a card and it was hid, Sara started counting. Immaculate did not know where to hide ,but she got an idea . She took a coat , pants,  shoes , hat  and painted it silver . Now is the main part which she hates, she painted her hands and face. When Sara finished counting  she could not even find her so after one hour searching for Immaculate. She got tired and stopped. But then Immaculate did not come back because she became a real statue. 


Week 24 (21)

Emily came to Manna and Keshia’s home to play among us ,when they were asleep  .  She thought to sit there  and play “ among us ”  alone  .  She started playing, she was light blue and the  flower . When the game started after few seconds the emergency button rang,  when Emily said it was the orange  no one believed .  Her anger would not stop , when she saw that  orange was the imposter . She screamed “ I told you that the orange one spoke first ”  Orange  was  the imposter . Ugh ! Keshia and Manna got up and knew that this day was not  a normal day . 

Week 23 (21)

Poor  boy named Nathin. He had never gone to school because he was scared that he was a dark brown person.  His mother told him to go to school. When  he came back he started crying and went to his bed. The next day was his birthday. His mother told him to try taking some balloon  for his birthday. When he reached the school his teacher was  angry, Nathin was frightening that he would be kicked out and he was kicked out. And then his mother knew everything that happened and she decided  never to send him to school again. 

Week 22 (21)

“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…

     One day Angela was happy , because she ordered a hoverboard 1 . She ordered it at  night and then she went to sleep . The next day she got up and  at the front of the door   the delivery reached her and she started driving it . She drove that to school  , in home , to walk , to friends home  and everywhere else  . Then it was too late and she went to sleep . The next day Angela could not find the charger for it and then she said ,but where did it go ?”she shouted . She was so sad and thinking where it went  . 


Week 20 (21)

 Prathin was going to school by walking , he was so sad that when  he saw people riding cycles and going to school , he remembered  that because it was the hard  times  it was hard to buy  . So he forgot about the cycle ,  studied and went back  . The next day was his birthday and his parents thought to  buy him a cycle  so he doesn’t need to walk . So they buyed    woke him  and wished him  and   gave him the gift. When he opened it was a cycle he  said  thank you . And then he rided that cycle everyday  . 

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 A girl named Susan , just got up and dressed up for school. She got out and  saw a pair of shoes  . She saw a paper written that it was magical shoes .  She wore it   . Then she went to school wearing those shoes.  Magic is that the shoes could use it once for anything  , but there was an issue too   . She used it once and came home .   . But there was a problem , when it just wouldn’t take off . And then she learned the lesson not to wear something without knowing . So she had to wear those shoes until it came out . 



Week 18 (21)

One day  Angel lived in a village that village people used to fight  . All the people were scared of the master of the village .  He will kill them  if they don’t give money . The people of the master got 1000 dollars and the master greedily took it .  Angel went to another place to not see people dying . Then there was a boy named Shiva , he liked her  but when Angel was going back to her village she warned him not to come and told  everything. She was so desperate , Angel left that place and told Shiva not to come there.



Week 17 (21)

One day, Ranio was deciding to go to the forest with his friends  , Sonu , Ghabie and Nathin .He told his parents and went .  Roan ,  , Sonu ,Gabi and Nathin went to the forest, when they were going. They saw a tree like a person walking. “Ran”! '' said Roan to everybody, they  jumped to the water and went and hid  behind the trees . Nathin said everybody ! We are boys not girls. We don't need to be scared. Everybody believed him  and when everybody went they understood  that it was  a tree which looks like a human . They all went home back happley. 


Week 15 (21)

One day Miss Preetha told everyone in the class to have hope  that though there is covid everything is going to be good . There was a girl named Manna she thought in her mind that she had hoped to ask her parents if she could go to learn piano . So she went to hope happily and asked her parents with hope but they said no . She was so sad but one day manna and her mother went outside. Her mother told sit to play with this barbie , she didn't like barbies . but one elderly girl told you can learn piano if it is your ambition she believed it and learned . And when her mother saw  it she was very happy . 

 THE END ! 


Week 14 (21)

Ravi asked his father if he could go to the museum because his friends told him there’s a new  dress and it looked like a haunted girl with no head . Ravi was interested to go , so his father told ok Ravi you can go . He went happily and he was so happy to see it. He enjoyed it a lot and he came  back home . And he told his father everything which happened and his father was happy because he came back safe so his father took him outside to eat icecream and dinner   The end .. 


WELCOME to GES at FMS!

15 comments:

  1. I cannot wait for you to post a story so I can read it.
    - Natalia.

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  2. Hi Suzanna! I really liked your writing piece, it made me feel that Ravi likes creepy things because he was not creeped out he was excited. Your ending was very surprising. Because the father thought he would be gone but he wasn't and it surprised me because it was a museum. Nice work! ~Lizzie :D

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  3. I LOVED your story!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait to see you! Your story was funny...but you don't end it with "The End" But I LOVED your story!!! I loved the part were it said "He went happily and he was so happy to see it. He enjoyed it a lot and he came back home . And he told his father everything which happened and his father was happy because he came back safe so his father took him outside to eat icecream and dinner." It was a very happy ending!
    ~SOLEIL

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  4. Hi suzanna, i really loved your week 15 because there was a twist at the end and Manna was finally happy!!- Zenaida<3

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  5. HI suzanna i'm jacob i loved your week 11 story about the hoverboard charger went missing because hoverboards are very fun to ride but i do not have one

    - from Jacob Roberts

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  6. Your week 22 story was pretty well made! I liked it because it leaves the reader at a cliff hanger! Really well done Suzanna!

    Asher LaPierre

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  7. I liked how you did it with the hoverboard keep up the good work

    Ahmet Dagli

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  8. Hi i liked you week 24 because it has a modern day game and other stuff i liked how they figured out that the day was not normal
    Ella Cohart 4

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  9. Suzanna, I like how the story was about Among Us! I have never seen a 100wc like that!

    -Cliff

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  10. I like your week 25 it was fun to read

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  11. I like your week 19 its so cool
    Kavya

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  12. hi suzanna, i like your week 26 and i think you're a great writer!! ~Zenaida

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  13. Hi suzana I LOOOVVVEEE your story's! Keep writing

    -Emma.Turano C-3

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  14. Suzanna i loved all of your stories and a hope that encourages you to keep writing

    From: Jacob Roberts

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