Mrs. Rossi

 Mrs. Rossi, 

Thank you for your 100 WC Contributions!

Week 27 SAMPLE 1:

I looked at the car clock and 30 minutes had dragged past. "Are we there yet," I whined. Finally, we walked toward the huge red tent. My shoes crunched peanut shells on the soft earth. Once inside, I spotted something strange out of the corner of my eye through an opening. I lifted the curtain and peeked in. My eyes widened to see an elephant painted with purple swirls. "Hello girl," I whispered. She looked right at me. I felt so happy. A few minutes later, the violin started playing letting the crowd know the show was about to begin.

SAMPLE 2:

The violin music filled the background and happy Stella sat at her small table in her playroom. She looked up at her mom and asked, “Can I play playdough, please?” 

Mom nodded her head and handed her the bag. 

“Look, mom! Purple is my favorite color.” 

Mom smiled. “What are you going to make?” she asked.

“An elephant!” shouted Stella excitedly.

“But elephants are gray,” mom teased.

Stella formed the playdough into an elephant with big ears and a long trunk. “My elephant is painted purple!” she beamed with pride.

“I love your creativity sweetie,” mom replied rubbing her back.


30 comments:

  1. this story to me sounds a bit peaceful in the beginning and then at the end you say parade which probably means its not going to be peaceful anymore

    from:ken

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  2. Hi Mrs.Rossi! I really liked week 27 sample 1 because you based it on a circus! I never even thought of that! I liked your sample 2 because it is very creative and fun to read! Good job!
    -Katherine

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  3. Hi Mrs. Rossi!!! Great job on your week 27!!! It was great! I love were it said "I looked at the car clock and 30 minutes had dragged past. "Are we there yet," I whined. Finally, we walked toward the huge red tent. My shoes crunched peanut shells on the soft earth." I love how you put in the details!
    ~Soleil

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  4. Mrs. rossi, I liked your week 27 sample 1, especially when you told us you were at the circus without actually telling. Keep up the good writing!-Theo

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  5. hi mis Rossi I really liked week 27 sample 1 it was really funny nice job Lily

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  6. Mrs Rossi,
    Your week 27 story is detailed! I liked how you started like "I looked at the car clock and 30 minutes had dragged past." I loved how you you described everything.
    Gemma Sela🌺

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  7. Great job Mrs. Rossi can't wait to read your next hundred word challenges. Luki😈😃

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  8. Hi Mrs. Rossi!
    I really liked your sample writings. They are really good with all of your detail put into it. I would totally read a book if you wrote one because I think your writing is so good!
    I loved the samples!
    ~Lizzie Lamme

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  9. Hi Mrs.Rossi! So funny where you went are we there yet? Congrats for the 100 WC showcase!!! ~ Suhaani

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  10. Hello Mrs.Rossi. I really like how in sample 1 week 27 you used the words, "My shoes crunched peanut shells on the soft earth." That had a really nice sound to it and it was unique! ~Ellie

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  11. Nice job miss.rossi for getting a 100 word challenge "show case"

    Andre

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  12. I really liked how detailed it was and funny good job mrs Rossi keep writing.
    Lily

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  13. Nice job! Very creative.
    -Jennavieve

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  14. Mrs.Rossi, I really enjoyed your sample 2 story! I loved it! I guess Stella had a fun time playing with Playdough!

    Asher =)

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  15. I loved your week 27 sample 2. It was good because it a) had all of the prompt in it and b) really showed something that could and probably has happened in real life. Good job!
    ~Cara C., GES @ FMS

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  16. liked your week 27, it had a lot details.
    Natalia

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  17. I think your week 27 was well put together.

    Izzy

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  18. I really like your showcased 100 WC. I like how you used the words, next times I'm going to try to use most of the words in one sentis like you did.
    -Morgan C-3

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  19. i liked sample 2 -ryley

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  20. Hi Miss Rossi I liked your sample 1 and sample 2 and that you have showcased at the first .Sample 2 was so funny and nice .
    Suzanna Sara Cherian ! C-3

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  21. I really like sample one.
    -Jennaiveve

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  22. Sample 2 is really creative.
    -Jennaiveve

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  23. I liked your week 27 sample 1 because you said stuff like against the soft earth

    Keep writing
    Anthony

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  24. I liked you week 27 sample 1. Creativity is such a wonderful thing.

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  25. week 27 i liked how you gave 2 samples and i liked the story

    mir.k

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  26. hi I like your creativity
    __________________KAVYA_________________________

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  27. I like your samples.

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  28. HiYa! I like both your stories! They were really creative. I have a question. Is sample 2 a true story?

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