Lily

Week 35 (21)
Where are you headed? asked the dog. “oh to the shops¨. Where are you going?  I have to ask for some directions. Which way to the shops ? it panted” “oh how about you follow me and I will show you but maybe we should get some water for you” “that's a good idea it panted” so we headed to get some water and food because I was also hungry. We sat down in this restaurant and I had the best dog food in the world and the water here was delicious and then my friend showed me the amazing shops. 

Week 34 (21)  To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.
“Excited for the boat trip?” asked my friend.
“Yes. I am so excited to see all the fish you have been telling me about, but it feels like so long until we get to go.”
“I know, but tomorrow morning we will be on our way.” 
It was morning, and we were in a car heading to the our destination.
“Wake up!” said my friend.
“W-What?” I responded, and then I realized it. “Really!?!?”
“Yes! Come on, let’s go!” and our boat trip started. Then I commented: “I didn’t realize they could fly like that!” as we saw flying fish.


Week 33 (21)
It was time for a road trip and I was so excited. Three hours had passed already and we were all getting tired. My dad said look at the window, and I knew we were close. I saw the tower that looked like a lighthouse and the most amazing view of the ocean. I opened the window and stuck my head out. I listened  to the waves and enjoyed every moment of the wind hitting my face. It felt like warm hugs. I knew I was arriving at my happy place.I couldn’t wait to get to the sandy beach.
Week 32 (21)
I was in my room. And a flash of light, then darkness closed the room.  
 I used my phone  to guide me to the living room. Where my parents were looking for flashlights in the cobberds and all of sudden  boom went the lightning 
I started to scream my parents stude up  not knowing I was  right next to them“oh there you are what is wrong” my dad asked “I got scared ”  “oh ok now look for some lights so we can see ok” “ok ” I said starting to feel better because I was with my family not alone.

Week 31 (21)
One day I was on a kayak and I had my oar in my hand. But I had a rule that I could not go too far so I started to row and I saw this mushroom on the grass with a big green field behind it . I was wistful to go to the mushroom but I could not go there because it would be too far from my house. I thought for a second I wish I could go there as my face wrinkled in disappointment. I wanted to reach that location but I knew it would be irresponsible.
Week 30 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.
It was October 30th. My friends and I were having a sleepover and we were getting ready to go to the store and pick out Halloween costumes and some candy. After a few minutes we were about to leave the house, and when we walked out, the wind whistled, pulling the door into the railing of the stairs. My friends and I ran to the car and headed off to the store. When we got to the store, we looked around the store to look at all of the costumes.  Suddenly darkness enveloped the room and everything was completely quiet.

Week 29 (21)
I passed  a big gate with the number 29 on it.
“There!!!” I yelled to my mom,  my mom turned around and we went into the driveway. 
  I walked to a white door. The door creaked open, and when she saw me she opened the door and ran and gave me a hug. “Hi” I said.
She replied “Hi, how are you doing?”.
“Good. How are you doing?”
“Good. Let's go inside.” 
My mom prepared food for us so we walked in. “What to eat?” I asked.
“You'll see.”
On the table there was toast and peanut butter cookies. “Yum!”

Week 28 (21)
I was out hiking when I heard a rattle in the bush. I wondered what it was as it let out a pitiful howl. I decided I would check to see what it was when I checked. My mouth dropped open. It was a dog that was wrapped in a   vine. “Poor thing.” I knelt to the ground and tried to unwrap it slowly, and when I did it jumped into my arms. “Hmmm,” I thought, “what am I going to name you, you poor thing…  how about Ben?” I turned around and headed home to show my mom Ben.


Week 27 (21)
When I visited Paris in France  I saw a Violin museum. There were displayed different types of violin, painted in different colors such as purple and teal with jewels all over it  and different designs. When I saw the teal colored one  with jewels ,I yelled to my sister “LOOK at the color and the jewels all over it ”. Then, I noticed that people were staring at me, I felt like an Elephant in the room.  It's a museum and no one yells in there, of course . I was just so happy to see a violin in my favorite color.

GES ONLY week
 I was getting ready for Christmas. I was in the living room and I grabbed the lights for the tree and my dad asked if I wanted  help. 
“I can  do it.” I grabbed the ladder and put it on the wall.  
A few seconds later. I checked to see if the lights worked. They were shining like  gold coins. We started to get red  and all different color ornaments . We put on music but all we could hear was the machines putting in  pavement next door.  
         The sound gave me a sinking feeling  something bad was going to happen. 

Week 26 (21)
Emma was invited to Marly's sleepover  and she was so excited.  Soon it was time for lunch.  Emma was so hungry. On the table there was a piece of toast on each plate with marmite. 
“Ewww what is this?” Rose said who Marly is. I replied 
“I do not no  but we should try it” I said 
“What if it is not good?” Marly mentioned 
 “Well it never hurts to try” I said.  We each took a bite of toast and marmite. “No I said I like marmite it is so salty” “yum” Marley said. Rose said “It is good”.

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One day my family  and I were walking.  We passed by an animal shelter and I looked through the glass. I saw the cutest thing ever. It was a  dog and 3 pups. I felt like a statue that could not move like  the one I saw earlier. I felt as if I was glued to the floor. I looked at my mom  and looked back at the dogs.  I said “Come on please!! I  will  be responsible!!”
 My mom thought for a second and said “Promise you will be responsible?” I nodded “Ok, but you have to be responsible.” 

Week 24 (21)
On one beautiful summer day I went to an animal shelter to rescue a puppy. There were so many and it was a hard choice. I kept walking back and forth thinking who I should take home.  I went to the kennel and a couple of them caught my eye, the was black and orange color one. I came closer and started calling for them before I could say anything else. The orange one spoke first in a howl. I knew it at that point, she was coming with me. She matched my personality and it was a great choice.


Week 23 (21)
 
One day we were playing at the fair and my mom asked if I wanted a balloon
  “I said of course”. between you and me you never should take down an offer like that. 
Then my mom said “what color” I said pink.  a few minutes had gone by. My mom walked back with a brown balloon .
“I do not want a brown balloon” I said as I lifted my foot and  kicked the brown balloon as it popped and made a loud scary frightening noise every one was so shocked for me kicking the ballon my mom looked mad 

week 22 (21)
“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…

 It was a  dark thunderstorm night. Maddison was in her room. A flash of thunder struck. The town lost power. Maddison was scared she couldn't see anything  she called  her mom. 
“Mom, where are you?”Maddison replied. 
Her mom replied 
“ I am in the living room.” Maddison Wanted to go to her mom. Maddison  went to grab her blanket. It was gone. But Where did it go? She shouted 
“mom did you see my blanket.” 
Her mom said “no why” when the lights came on  her blanket was on her bed. How  did this happen.? At least she found it.   

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It was a pleasant hot summer day when I was on a bike ride. I heard  the ice cream truck screech as it started to stop.
I peddled quickly over to a wooden pole and placed my yellow bike next to it . I sprinted  to the other side of the road to get ice cream. 
I looked back at my bike and it was hanging upside down “Oh my goodness!” I dropped my ice cream on the ground not even caring. I quickly crossed the road to see my bike and took it down. I was lucky it was fine. 


Week 19 (21)

I was playing with my rocket ship when it just wouldn’t take off. I was so confused. I just got it. I was so disappointed so I went to my mom and dad to tell them. And when I went my mom asked did you follow the instructions and I said of course. And when my dad looked at it he said that something was missing and we had to return it. 

I was so disappointed so my dad went to the store and returned it. And when he came to my room he was holding a new box. Yesssssssss. 

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It was the day I was waiting for. My friends and I would go for a bike  ride with my  new bike.My mom warned me that  I could not go for a bicycle ride this late. I was very disappointed but  I greedily went to the garage. 
I  hopped on my bright yellow bicycle  and rode off as fast as I  could  .I felt really bad but I was so desperate to see my friend's reaction. I almost wanted to turn around but I acted like everything was fine and that the next day I might not be alive.          


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It was a sunny summer morning when I went on a walk. All of a sudden, I heard something in the bushes. I felt as if everything stopped and nobody could move. We were stuck and frozen with no place to go. I was terrified!  What should I do ? should I look or stay frozen like a sculpture in the museum. I finally decided I would turn and see what was behind me. When I turned around, I saw a  puppy that was all alone. I could not believe it.  From that day on Benji became my “furever” best friend. 


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This beautiful dress belongs to the lost queen who disappeared in the darkness of night. She was loved by many.There were rumors that during one windy and cold night, she was walking the hallways of the palace. The queen was seen leaving the palace in a hurry and she was never seen again. Some believed that she escaped her loveless marriage. Others were saying that she was ordered by the heartless king to never show her face, due to scarring from unknown disease. There are reports of her ghost roaming around the hallways of the palace until this day.


Week 13 (21)
It was a  sunny afternoon when I decided I would get out of bed and get dressed in my new outfit I got on my birthday.And after that I decided  I would go and play outside. After a few minutes I was done getting dressed when I finally  went outside. When I noticed that something was on my hand. It was a  bracelet. I didn’t remember putting it on if I did not put it on who did... then when I realized there was a bite mark on my bracelet and then it struck me it was my dog. 


Week 11 (21)
 
The princess marley was in her kitchen making cupcakes for her friends. It was her birthday so she decided she is making cupcakes. She will put extra  white frosting like the color of her castle.Because she is very crafty in her cooking she loves cooking. 
 she heard her doorbell ring. It must be her friends, she thought. 
So she ran over to her door and asked what they wanted to do. They said we saw a big pile of leaves want to play in the leaves. Yes let's go. So they went outside and started rolling in the leaves. 

Week 10 (21)
It was the day before Christmas. I was finishing wrapping  the presents. I was down to the last present. I had just enough  wrapping paper, at least I thought so…

I grabbed a piece of tape and started wrapping the  present.  I ran out of paper half  way through, how disappointing, if only it was a bit smaller. What should I do? That was the last piece of wrapping paper. I asked my mom and she said we have plenty up in the attic.  I went to the attic and found exactly the same one. That's how Christmas was saved.

Week 9 (21)
It was a sunny fall Afternoon when I was playing with my action figures On the deck.when a bee plopped right where I was playing I was terrified how do I know if it is dead or not. so I decided to grab my action figure's hand and touch its leg and see if it was dead or not. The bee did not move, not a tiny bit. It was dead. I was so glad even though they gave us honey. I am terrified of bees so I decided I would go inside and tell my parents the story.
Week 8 (21)


One hot summer day Emily was playing, when her mom said “Emily, did you finish your chores?” She replied “Not yet, but I am doing it right now.”

Emily marched down the stairs to the kitchen and announced that she will be finishing her garden work.


When Emily went outside, she grabbed big heavy bags and went to the garden. Suddenly, she got surrounded by bees, she kept waving her hands all exhausted and breathing hard, she simply raised her fists to protect herself from them and alert her mom. She quickly ran inside with the big, painful, bee sting.


Week 7 (21)

One morning, when I was getting ready I heard a weird sound coming from my older sister's room. I was curious what it was. When I went in, I saw a little puppy with a red bow. I ran to it and picked him up. It felt so fluffy. I didn't understand why didn't anyone tell me? It had to be a surprise. Even Though I didn’t have concrete proof, I knew it. I danced out of her room with excitement. I decided to hop on my red scooter and ride to my friends house to share this exciting news.


Week 6 (21)
It was a beautiful day in the Fall when I arrived from school. I noticed a big box on my front porch. There was no name, no address. I knew that I am not supposed to open packages that were not addressed to me. The closer I approached the bigger my urge was to pick it up. I walked past it, but I had to see what was inside. I went back to the porch, grabbed the box and over sudden I heard noise. I quickly looked inside and saw the most beautiful white fur puppy with bright blue eyes.


Week 5 (21)
We are getting attacked, start getting ready and start pushing the cannon. Hurry up gentlemen, the enemy is approaching fast !!! Please take your positions,the cannonballs are ready to be launched boom.There it goes, we have hit the target. It is not over yet , everyone get into positions,we have a battle to win. We have a kingdom to protect. The people of the kingdom are counting on us. We cannot disappoint them.I see they are approaching from the other side. We launched the final cannonball .They are retrieving, Victory!!! we have won. Our kingdom is safe now.

Week 4(21)


One day I was practicing violin and I was having some trouble with my bow, so I decided to take a really long walk. While walking, I noticed a shadow behind the prickly green bush behind my neighbors house.. As I approached closer I noticed a dwarf goat. I got so excited because I always wanted one. Once I approached,the goat ran into my arms so fast that it bruised my forearm. I picked it up gently and went to my neighbors home to return it. My kind neighbors saw our immediate connection and allowed me to keep it.
Week 3(21)
Hi my name is emma i'm a Squirrel and i was climbing a tree and there was this tiny branch and there were a lot of acorn and it is hard to find acorns when there are so many Squirrel that i would go for it because i am a Squirrel so i went for it and 3 other Squirrels And they wanted some to so they said do it do it so i did and i fell i wish i never should have said yes a few minutes later i woke up and i realized my acorns wore gone

Practice Week




I am a bike and as you can see, there was a little accident. I will tell you the story of how it happened. I was riding and in this pretty neighborhood and my owner decided to not pay attention. Over sudden, he started to wave his hands because there were bees everywhere. Come on who is scared of bees.He lost balance and crashed into the heybell. My poor front wheel is hurting and I hope I can survive this horrific crash. Moreover, I hope my poor owner can get himself out of this situation. This is pretty embarrassing!

44 comments:

  1. I really liked how your bike narrates the story for your story
    ~Lizzie Lamme

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  2. This is really good! I like how it's the bike narating, not a human.
    ~Cara C.

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  3. I like how you wrote this from the bikes point of view
    ~Amina A

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  4. I noticed that everybody loved the bikes point of view i really liked it too and i can almost hear you narrating the story i loved how you used a complex choice of words! -Alba Hila

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  5. I Really liked how the bike narrates the story! Keep it up.

    Soleil Dupuis.

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  6. I loved it it was so good I want to hear a second part .

    -from natalia

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  7. I really like how you said the enemy is here and then you won and now your kingdom is safe. Liked reading it -Lizzie

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  8. Hi lily thank you for reading my story. I liked your story it was like it was made by a pro.
    very nice from Ashton

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  9. WOW! Nice job Lily! That story of week 14 makes me want to know what happened to the queen and it makes me want to study her. I also liked how you used the picture of that week, and how the queen was wearing a beautiful dress and then she disappeared. Nice job! ~Lizzie :)

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  10. Nice week 14 I really enjoyed it.

    ---Brian Jiang

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  11. I like the name Benji. Its cute













    -Cliff

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  12. Nice week 16 So I saw that you named your puppy benji well there is a movie called benji. WARNING:THE MOVIE, BENJI IS SUPER SAD
    -Ahmet

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  13. Hi Lily!
    I enjoyed your story, especially the ending of the discovery of a new 'furever' best friend. It works perfectly to describe a special relationship with our animal friends :)

    Thanks for sharing!
    Francine (Team100WC)
    Twin Cities, MN USA

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  14. Lily,
    I really liked your story about how you put your bike against the pole to get ice cream and then you dropped the ice cream and didn't care about it anymore and then you said your bike was lucky it was fine. That was very detailed, even your whole story! I liked how you said you pedalded quickly because the ice cream truck screeched to a stop! Very nice job!
    Keep up the good work!
    ~Lizzie :D

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  15. I liked your week 23 piece! I like how you got the idea of a fair and balloons from the prompt. Nice work!
    -Cara C.

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  16. Lily,
    Your week 24 peice is so pretty! I love how you started off like "One summer day..."
    Keep up the awesome writing,
    -Gemma Sela, 🌺

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  17. I really liked your week 22 work. Sometimes when you are scared or in a rush you don't see things and I think that happened with the blanket.
    Keep writing!
    -Emma Chort#4

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  18. The week u got show cased was so cute. I loved it. Keep up the great work!

    -Jennavieve

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  19. Hi Lily,
    for week 24 like how you added "in a howl."
    From: Lena Noel Pierle.

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  20. I like how in week 16 you find a abandoned puppy and take it in. That really shows how much you love dogs and will help an animal in need. Keep writing! ~Ellie

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  21. Hello Lily, I love week 25. It is so cute. It shows haw much you love dogs. I am very excited to see next week.

    -Jennavieve

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  22. I like your week 25! It really shows your personality in being kind and trying to help people (or in this case, animals). Good work! Can't wait for next week!
    ~Cara C.

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  23. I really like your week 25 work. It was very detailed and is so true to what happens when you see puppies.
    Keep writing!
    -Emma Cohort#4

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  24. I like how you use lots of dialog.

    -Morgan

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  25. I like how in your week 26 you incorporated the prompt in something you wouldn't expect; a sleepover. Nice work, keep writing!!
    ~Cara C.

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  26. hi lily,
    i liked how your 100 wc for week 26 was a little realistic when they had marmite on their toast and where questioning whether to eat it or not.
    from lena noel pierle

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  27. I love GES week! I wonder what is going to happen next!
    -Jennaiveve

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  28. Hi, I liked your week 27 I liked how you put "It's a museum and no one yells in there" because it describes the reason people looked at you
    EllaC4

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  29. I liked you ges one, too wonder what is going to happen next.

    Natalia

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  30. Hi Lily,
    I really liked your week 28 100 word challenge. I would have never thought about using the phrase like that and I would have saved and helped the dog too and I would've kept it too. Nice work! :D
    ~Lizzie Lamme

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  31. Lily,
    I like the part of week 29 when they walked into the house and there were cookies. I want the cookies.

    -CLiff🙃

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  32. i like week 5 it was funny and a cool idea

    Izzy pangburn

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  33. Anna (Team 100WC)May 10, 2021 at 11:48 AM

    Hi Lily, I really enjoyed your story for week 30, it was creative and also a little bit creepy at the same time! In particular, I enjoyed the language techniques used to describe the setting such as, 'the wind whistled'- a very good use of personification. I would love to find out what happens next!
    Keep up the good work, Anna (Team 100WC)

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  34. i like your week 31 it's so good i like how you use wrinkled face in disappointment

    from:ken

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  35. I love your storys
    -Emma.Turano C-3

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  36. i liked how you stared in your room week 32
    Peyton

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  37. Hi Lily,
    I really liked your 100 WC week 33. I love how you based it off of the beach and being in the car going to the beach. I like your description on some of your lines that makes me want to go to the beach. Great job!
    ~Lizzie

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  38. I like how in the beginning you said you are going on a road trip


    peyton

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  39. I love your week 8!!! I like how she marched down stairs.~Soleil

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  40. Lily,
    I like how you incorporated a lot of talking in your story.
    - Elliott Iddings {Keep Writing}

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  41. Hi Lily I liked your week 35 it was very good well done and what a loving friend in the story because it gave water to the dog.Nice Job..

    Suzanna Sara Cherian

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