Lena

Week 35 (21)
“Hi, I’m a dog. Are you a dog? I’m going shopping today. Anyway which way to the shops? it panted. I mean I panted. Hi 
Hi Hi. ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?!” 
“Oh, CHIPMUNK!!!!”
“HI Bye Smell you later.” 
“Oh, Hi, have we met before? Hi? I’m A dog. Are you a dog? Can you please rub my belly? Or my ears? I have an Itch. Please? Or do I need to give you the puppy eyes.”
“Hi, Hello, ARF. Ok Bye. Bye Bye bye bye.”
“Gotta go get some peanut butter from the store’s. Bye bye bye bye bye.” 


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The little caterpillar made it’s criscillis. 

It spun in all directions swinging back and forth. Round and round. Until the little caterpillar had disappeared inside its chrysalis. 

One day I saw a butterfly emerge from its chrysalis. First it let it’s wings dry then it flew away. I didn’t realise they could fly. 
Here's why, A: when they are born they don’t have wings. And B: I never saw a caterpillar emerge from a chrysalis. 

But now that I have seen it in progress I can learn more on this natural phenomenon. 


Week 33 (21)

Old and rickety the tower stands,
Made from stone and rock, 
Old and rickety the tower stands,
Near water as blue as the sky, 
Old and rickety the tower stands, 
Reaches to the sky like a finger, 
Old and rickety the tower stands, 
Never been used in 100 years
Old and rickety the tower stands,
Yes old and rickety but the tower still stands reaching for the sky,
Old and rickety the tower still stands,
True to its country,
Old and rickety the tower stands. 
Old but true, rickety but strong, the tower stands,
Old and rickety the tower stands. 

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Once in a dark place, in a dark house. (This dark place is always enveloped with darkness.) 

Here is the story of this mysterious place… 

It was a sunny afternoon, when a flash of light then darkness. Lightning interrupted the beautiful day. 

It wasn't just lightning but all the worst natural disasters at once! In one place.
 
After the storm was over the house was dark, not touched by the devastating storm. Once a year if you are unlucky you may see the storm approach. 

All who come to live in the house become ghosts within hours of their arrival... 

Week 31 (21)
Did you know that fairies have boats? Their boats are made from a wrinkled mushroom and their oars are mushrooms too. 
There is also a fairy queen. She rule the fairy world. 
In the fairy world there are dogs and cats. They can fly!
And of course this is just my imagination. I’m very wistful. 
Someday maybe just maybe I will finally see a fairy. Someday in time. And that would be a dream come true. 
I will never stop believing in fairies. Fairies are a part of my imagination. 
Most students stop believing in fairies but I never will. 

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My night light flickered in the house during the big storm when suddenly, darkness enveloped the room…
It was night when it happened. I was in my room when it all happened. A searched my end table for a flashlight when BAM! 
A flash of lightning illuminated the room, and barely missed my window too but knocked down the tree that had seen better days. 
And that was the WORST nightmare ever!
Never mind It was the BEST nightmare ever. Maybe the best in the world. 

Why? I love scary things! 

Never mind. It wasn't a nightmare. It actually happened.
Week 29 (21)
That fence has been there for 11 years, ever since I was born. I want to go outside to escape the house and go over the fence but I can't. 
In fact I NEVER LEFT THE HOUSE!!!!!!!
That fence I heard is now red and goes around our perfect touch-me-not cottage. 
I also heard that our house number is 29.
And that the fence hasn't been tended to in 11 years, so it is now overgrown with weeds. 
I've also heard about things that fly. BUT I also know that nothing can fly.
They call the flying/winged things birds.

Week 28 (21)
It was a cold winter night. I was seeping in my soft warm bed as it let out a pitiful howl. 
Who is it? The wind of course. 
When the wind howled it sounded like it was hurt as it rattled the wind pains. 
Just the sound of the wind made the whole house cold except for the nice warm bed.
In the morning the whole house was freezing cold. The house was so cold that everything that was meddle was cold enough so you could barely hold it for a second until your hands got cold too.  
The End

Week 27 (21)
Once their was an Elephant who was always HAPPY!!!!
This Elephant painted her violin purple. Her favorite color. 
Everywhere she went she brought her purple violin with her. Playing one song only.
“I’m an elephant, And I  love to sing, and play my purple violin. Happily playing my purple violin!” sang the elephant. 
Nothing else but that one song called my purple violin. Over and over and over an over and over and over and over again. 
Yet still she didn’t learn another song to play and sing on the violin. 
And that’s the end of my happy story. 

GES ONLY week

I was walking on the street when I saw some coins on the pavement.

 I followed them. At the end of the coin trail I saw a red ladder. 

From my perspective the ladder looked as if it were sinking into the pavement. 

Then all of the sudden there was a yell from the sky. 

“Hey kid, watch out this ladder isn’t stable. And I don’t want the ladder to fall on you.” said the man on the ladder.

Quicker than the blink of an eye not only did I back away but the ladder crashed to the ground. CRASH!
Week 26 (21) 

“No,” she said, “I Like Marmite.”

Ok here's what happened. 

Mom took me and my younger sister who is now 2 years old. We went to the grocery store to buy some Marmite. BUT the store ran out. So we went to get some peanut butter instead. 

BUT again like i said this store ran fresh out of peanut butter. (that is what happens when you like the countryside.)

So when we went to get some butter that is when my sister had her first and her worst fit EVER!

So after 3 whole days the store got some Marmite. 

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And there it still stood the dancing frozen man. Unmoving……….
Still not moving…
3 hours later
STILL IT IS NOT MOVING.
Why?
“Hey frozen person please move.”
3 more hours later
Still not moving. 
4 hours later 
 STILL NOT MOVING! lost interest in watching frozen man. Goodbye!
“Staying still for 10 HOURS is a lot of work.”
1 minute later…
Then I changed my mind and wanted to watch him again but when I turned around the frozen person was GONE. 
“ WHAT! IT’S ALIVE! SO RUN, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!”
To be truthful it only fell down on the ground. 


Week 24 (21)
Once there were 3 oranges. 1 was orange, 1 was green, another was black. 

The first time they met the orange one spoke first. 

They never talked after that. They only sat there. Staring at each other. Doing nothing but staring. 

After 3 or 4 years the 3 oranges spoke. One said hi. The other said hello, the orange one was silent. 

The 3 oranges never spoke again. There was only a very long silence. A really long silence. A forever silance 

That just might be the end of my happy orange story. For the next 3 or 4 years. 

Week 23 (21)

It was halloween and at my house there was a brown balloon with a frightening green face on it.  

For halloween I decorated my house to look like a haunted house. 

When I first blew up the balloon I got so frightened I kicked it.but I will NEVER kick the balloon again. 
And I am sure you wouldn't want to see the creepy balloon, if it scared me it probable would scare you. 

Anyway back to the haunted house, I cut paper to look like birds and I boarded up all the windows and bought some creepy black fenses. 


Week 22 (21)
“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…

I was playing in my room with my younger sister Ivy when she asked me where her boots went.
“BUT WHERE DID IT GO?” Ivy Shouted “ I WANT MY BOOTS ! I LOVED IT! SANTA GAVE THEM TO ME!”
I said that mom gave them away. I reminded my younger sister Ivy.  
Not true! It didn’t fit her any more! Altho she did cry when my mom wanted to give it to my neighbor Keagan. Because she could use it.  
Ivy could have went to keagan and said give me my boost back, but she never did. she didn’t need them. 


Week 20 (21)
One day there was a 2 legged thing that tied a 2 wheeled thing to me. 
I have seen  2 legged’s ride them. 
Now it’s my turn. 
“Wind it’s time to get blowing. I want to ride my wheels.” I said
Woooosh. The wind blew as I tried to get up my roots to ride my 2 wheels. 
Then the wind stopped and my roots didn't budge. So I can’t ride my wheels. 

And that is why this 2 weel or 2 legged yellow thing is still on me not below me. So i my 2 weels is not ridible. 


Week 19 (21)

It was a Sunday afternoon when mom took me shopping.
First I wanted to go to the toy section, but mom said we will go there last.
Finally when we got to the toy section, I searched the shelves for a plastic rocket that would work. 

When we got home i tore open the pacedg hopping to use the rocket. 
5 minnets later I finished the rocket. 
Then I tried to make it work. 

I was upset when it just wouldent take off. 

“MOOOOOM!” I screamed. “My ROCKET WONT TAKE OFF!! I THINK IT BROKE!!!!!!! SEE?!! LOOK MOM!!” Ivy skreamed


Week 18 (21)
It was a cool autumn day when Amelia whent to get her new Yellow bicycle. She was desperate to ride her new bike. 
Before she went to get on her helmet her mother warned to watch out for cars. 
Amilia hopped on her bike and raced down the street. Then stopped by a shiny black car. 
The man that came out looked as if he was from a mansion of some sort. Any way he looked like he was rich.   
When the man looked down he smiled in a greedily way.  

Then picked up something shiny, small, circular and golden.  


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Saturday December 30, Central Park in NYC (also known as backyard park.).
Hi diary today I went to Central Park, well not the real Central Park the one that is in my backyard. I made it. Let me tell you about what happened to Central park2 or back yard park. 
It was morning I turned on the lights in Central Park2. The lights turned on and lit up that part of my backyard for a couple minutes then everything stopped and the lights blinked off. 
I found the batteries had died. So I changed the batteries in time for breakfast.


Week 14 (21)

“Mom! For Halloween I want to be a spider queen!! I want a long red dress with green bows and white spiderwebs on the top. And It should be a medieval dress.” 

“Mistie. That would cost too much money but I could try sew you one.”

Weeks went by. When the dress was done it was exactly like Mistie said it should look like. But the problem is it looked horrible. 
Good thing Mistie liked the dress. 
“The dress is perfect. When i bring it to school my friends will love it.” Mistie said as she danced around the dress. 


Week 13 (21)
One sunny morning in a small house in the big village there lived a mother and her only daughter named mary. 
 
“Mary. please put on the tea kettle on the stove so when i come back i can have some tea.” said Mary’s mother 
“Yes mother. I will” said mary.
 
Later that day Mary cleaned her room, dusted the house, swept the floor, fed the chickens, made lunch, and made some rice. Mary also put on the tea kettle. 

When Mary's mother came back she said “what is on the stove? rice?” 

“I didn’t remember putting it on.” Mary stuterd. 

Week 10 (21)
Clara was walking in her neighborhood with her mom and friends.

Clara has been taking piano lessons for a year, and they need a piano. 

Someone in the neighborhood put a piano at the end of their driveway with a free sign on it. 

“ Here is a piano for your lessons!” said Clara's mom.


They pushed the piano to Clara's house.

They tried to push the piano through the door, and the piano didn’t fit.  
If only it was a bit smaller! 

“Let's put the piano in the garage.” suggested Jen.

“Good idea Jen.” said Leona.

“I agree.” said Clara. 

Week 9 (21)
I was running around, the green grass tickling my toes. 

Then the I rain to the fence to say hi to Lissa, a golden retriever. 
I pet her, and her coat was like satten. 

There is one thing I always do when I see Lissa. And that is I always give her a stick. So I did. 

Then I had enough outdoor play time for today. So as I was running through the soft green grass I felt a prick. 

So I rain in the house crying and told mom what happend. She gave me a band-aid. 

Week 8 (21)






It was Saturday morning. Leona hopped out of bed and got dressed.

Today Leona was going hiking up a Mount Caskade in the Adirondacks. It wasn't her first mountain hike.

This time Leona was going to hike up the mountain with Clara, and Jen, her best friends.

When Leona finished getting ready for the hike her friend's car pulled into the driveway.

“Ready?” asked Jen.

“Yes.” Leona replied.

The hike was hard but worth it. The fall scenery was amazing.

Exhausted and breathing hard, she simply raised her fists!

“That was the best hike ever! Let’s go again!” Leona exclaimed.
Week 7 (21)


It was a beautiful autumn day. The sun was shining, and the colorful leaves danced in the autumn breeze.

Ivy was riding her red scooter.

Ivy was going so fast she didn’t notice the bump in the road. So the front wheel of the scooter went over the bump, and tipped over.

Ivy fell on the hard concrete. She only got a scratch.

Later when Ivy got home she put on a band ade, and snuggled with Fluffy, the family's dog. She is a bichon frize.

“ you shouldn't go riding your scooter without mom or dad watching you.” Said Lena


Week 6 (21)

It was friday afternoon, and there was a storm. The wind howled like wolves, the trees swayed like they were made of rube, and there was lightning thunder and of course RAIN.

When the storm stopped Lily opened the front door. There were leaves, branches and pine cones everywhere. But there was also a package on the bottom step. Lily brought the package inside.

And asked mom if it was hers. But my mom only said ¨don't open it.¨

I had to see what was inside the box so I opened it. And it was birthday decorations.

Week 5 (21)


My family went to a museum with me and when we got to the Colonial America section there was this exhibit. It looked like that the Colonists were stuffing the canon. One of the guides said that the Colonists are preparing the canon to sink a British ship.

The person that has a green shirt on is going to fire the canon. In the Colonial America exhibits we learned that the Colonists wanted to break free from the British but the British wanted to rule America. Then there was the Revolutionary war. My favorite exibit was the Colonial America exibit.

Week 4(21)

It was early in the morning when Mrs. Green went for a walk with her dog. The sun was just coming out when Mrs. Green walked on the prickly grass.

When she turned the corner she heard the sweet sound of a violin coming from her friends house. As Mrs. Green walked towards the beautiful melody, she was not looking where she was going, so she tripped over her dog and bruised her leg.

When Mrs. Green noticed the bruise on her leg she cleaned with peroxide then put some healing ointment on the bruise, and it never really hurt.


Week 3(21)

…they never should have said yes…

The Bike Race.

Maddie got out of bed. This summer Maddie really wanted to have a bike race, so she hopped out of bed, put on her favorite biking shorts and t-shirt.

Then Maddie went into the shed to get her bike.



When she asked her parents if she could have a bike race they said yes. Clara came over and they raced up and down her street when Maddie fell off her bike, and scraped her arm. When she put a bandaid on she thought to herself they never should have said yes.

40 comments:

  1. lena, i love riding bikes and i love this story, maybe do more about sports!
    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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  2. I liked it. It was really good.

    -from natalia

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  3. i like that the violin story was a lot about you!
    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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  4. I like how much detail you put in your story. It makes the story flow! That was a really good story! ~Lizzie ;)

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  5. I LOVED your story.Wright more.

    Soleil

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  6. Hi Lena, I like your story because it is very interesting. Great story. From Kyle in Ms Brennocks 5th class

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  7. I love in your week 14 you really added detail, like when Mistie "danced around in a dress." Good thing it was halloween because the dress was bad! And Mistie didn't notice!!! Amazing work! I could tell that you put a lot of work into this story.
    -Katherine

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  8. I love the idea that you have your own version of Central Park in your backyard, Lena. You build up a good bit of suspense before your reader learns that it is just new batteries that are needed for the lights. I particularly like the phrase ‘the lights blinked off’. I can just picture that happening.

    Janet Team 100WC

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  9. Week 18
    Hi Lena,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I wonder who that man was and what did he pick up?
    Good work this week.

    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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  10. Hi Lena,
    I read your week 19 and I thought it was very descriptive, like when you tore open the package.
    Keep up the awesome writing.

    -Gemma Sela,🌺

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  11. I like your week 19. I like it because you wanted the rocket so bad and waited and when you built it it didn't work. Keep up the good work,
    Katherine

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  12. I love how in week 16 you have incorporated how he/she was writing in a diary. ~Ellie

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  13. I like how you did it like it was a creepy balloon.(Week 23).- Ahmet

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  14. Great job on week 24! I like how it's one of those stories where it might continue. Like a cliffhanger, but less suspenceful and more imagonation for the reader. Great job! Looking foward to week 25!
    ~Cara C.

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  15. Hi lena, I liked you week 23, wow that brown balloon was creepy, lol. Great job.
    - Natalia

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  16. I love your week 8 story from Henry Rivas

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  17. I like your week 24! I like it because you made it so they never would talk again! Also won't they rot after 2 weeks or so?

    -Cliff

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  18. I liked your week 24 I also like how you it seem like they would never talk again.
    Natalia

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  19. I really liked your 100 word challenge piece week 26 because it was very funny to read.
    Great job!
    ~Lizzie Lamme

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  20. Lena, your week 23 story was funny and spooky! It was funny how you said, "but I will NEVER kick the balloon again." Nice job!

    Asher =)

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  21. Hi Lena, I liked your GES only week because it was funny and I liked how you added a 'CRASH'
    Ella C4

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  22. It was really funny how in week 26 you made it so the store kept running out of things! ~Ellie

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  23. I like your GES @ FMS week only!
    I think that you wrote everything perfectly!
    And you timed how the ladder fell perfectly too!

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  24. Hi! I liked your GES only story! I really liked that the ladder fell t was really funny! Good job!
    -Katherine

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  25. I liked your week 26 thought it had a lot of great details.
    Great job!\
    - Natalia Ortiz

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  26. wow! This is really cool! Keep up the good work! Suhaani





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  27. Hi lena,
    nice week 22 it was funny

    _Kavya_

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  28. Hi lena, you did a good job incorporating the 5 word prompt on your "ges only" week ~Zenaida

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  29. I liked your week 28 it was creative how you used the prompt

    From your friend
    Henry Rivas :^)

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  30. I really liked how detailed it was I can imagine how cold it was that night
    Lily

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  31. Hi Lena,
    I really liked your 100 WC week 28. It had a lot of detail that you put in and I like how you said, "It was a cold winter night. I was seeping in my soft warm bed as it let out a pitiful howl.
    Who is it? The wind of course." That was a really cool craft you put into your story. Nice job!
    ~Lizzie

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  32. i lie week 3 it was a cool idea and you did a good job editing it

    Izzy pangburn

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  33. I like your week 31! I like how it is about how you believe in fairies and you write about it to show how it is real! keep up the good work,
    Katherine

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  34. hi lena, I really like your Week 29. Keep Writing! -Zenaida <3

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  35. Wow I liked how you made your point in the story and it was also very calm!!
    Nice week 31

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    Henry Rivas

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  36. Lena,
    Your week 34 story is very realistic.
    Gemma Sela

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  37. I like your week 22 it was creative

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    Henry Rivas

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  38. Nice week 34! Like how real it sounds and how I could just feel what the character (or you) could feel.
    ~Cara C.

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  39. On week 33 I like how described the tower. It is great!
    -Jennavieve

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