Katherine

Week 16 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.

“Take that!” Jack yells, punching Ben in the stomach. Ben falls onto the ground, trying to get away. 
“Ok, ok, you win” he winches. Jack puts his hands on his hips 
“This wouldn’t have happened if you didn’t steal my homework.” Jack was a athlete, and Ben was the bully. I was watching the whole thing from my hiding spot in the bushes. Jack looked my way. 
“Ashley?” Everything stopped and my heart beat. I have been spotted. Ben looks up. 
“Whaddya mean?” he looks at me. “Oh. Hi Ashley”  Jack punches Ben playfully in the arm... 

To Be Continued...



Week 14 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.


“AHHHH!!” a woman, made out of plastic, came running, Screaming at the top of her lungs!  I jump into a bush to hide, the spiky leaves cutting into my skin. The weird monster looks right at me, but runs off.  I let out the breath I didn’t know I was holding. 
I started wandering around the forest, but after a few hours it was night.  As I closed my eyes, I thought about the creepy plastic woman.  I snuggled into my soft clothes, thankful for the warmth. As I lay there, staring at the stars, the world faded to blackness.


Week 13 (21)
“Roar!!!” the green-ish blue-ish dragon swoops down and opens it’s mouth, sharp, pointy teeth heading right towards me, about to chomp me to bits. I jolt awake, gasping for air. All I see is blinding white light. When my eyes adjust, I look around at the white world, full of snow. How is this possible? Its the middle of summer! I look down at my clothes. They are not the fluffy pink polkadot pajamas I was just wearing, but a white fur coat, white fur pants, and leather shoes. I didn’t remember putting it on. I slowly stood up. “AHHHH!!”

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My wagon starts rolling down the hill as the big, white castle comes in sight. “MA! I SEE IT!!!” squeals my little sister, Eglantine. I lean out to see it. Suddenly, the wagon door opens and I fall out! The wagon keeps moving. The leaves make a loud CRUNCH! Under me. I run all the way to the castle and my family is waiting for me. I hug them. Then I go to the person who is waiting in the castle and they lead me into a crafty room. There, they bandage my cuts and bruises. “Thank you” I say.

Week 10 (21) 

   Sam and I sit in our seats. The lights turn off. “Lights, Camera, ACTION!” yells the director. “ Natasha’s fabulous outfit” the speakers sing. Some beautiful women walks around and shows off. Three more girls come on. “Time to Judge” Sam said. I look at Natasha. I look at her big red poofy dress. if only it was a bit smaller.  I look at the second persons dress. Then the third. Then, I talk to Sam. “Amy?”  “Perfect,” she answers.  Then she announces: “The winner is…Amy!” Amy screams loudly. Everyone has a party and Amy gets her prize: A million dollars.

Week 9 (21)
“RUN!” Jack yells, flinging his skinny stick at the giant monster.  We run into the forest until our legs hurt.  “Why did we come here,” I complain.  “So we can be famous, remember?” Jack answers.  “ROAR!” We start running again.  We came to a undiscovered planet, then died from a giant bee.  Just great.  Maddie thought.  Suddenly, the bee falls!  “What…” Jack says.  He pokes the bee with his stick.  “It’s dead” Maddie whispers.  “Let's make camp.” They chop down some trees and build a small house.  They make a fire and eat the monstrous bee for dinner. “ROAR!” CRASH!

Week 8 (21)


“Goal!” coach yells. The red team scored. Claire stomps her foot. “We can still win” (Claire was on the blue team.) The score was 4-4. “Go!” the coach screams. Everyone races to the ball. Claire follows, blocking, kicking, and suddenly... she has the ball! She can’t pass, she has to kick! This is going to be the winning kick. “She kicks, she scores!!!!” Exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists. Everyone one the blue team celebrate. Claire walks to the coach, then the coach gives her a trophy! “The Winner is blue team!” he says, picking up her hand.


Week 7 (21)

“Cmon” I yelled to my brother, SCOOTER. We rushed outside. The music blared in our ears. Our neighbors played music, and when they did, we went outside. We couldn’t afford music. I grabbed my RED dress and DANCED to the beat across our CONCRETE driveway. FLUFFY, our neighbor's cat, walked around us. Suddenly, people came and threw us money! More people came, watching our dance. Soon , we danced everyday, and got so much money, we got rich! We were able to get a dog, we were able to get our own music, we were even able to go to school!

Week 6 (21)


“Hi Alex! I’m exited for your birthday tomorrow!” Riley exclaims. “I know! Me too!” I answer. “I have a gift for you in my backpack, but don’t open it” Riley wags her finger at me. I sigh. It’s so tempting. But I let it go. I can’t stop thinking about the suprise. When Riley is going to the bathroom, I snatch it, then I open it. Suddenly, sparkles and glue shoot onto my face! Everyone laughs. I rush into the bathroom, but it wouldn’t come off! What have I done, I thought. But I had to see what was inside.
Week 5 (21)


“Watch out!” There is a lot of yelling. I am hiding from the crazy commotion in the tower. “BOOM!” There goes the cannon again. A few more hours, and everything stops. I dare a peek out the window, and the war is over! People are cleaning up and going home to celebrate! My mom arrives to pick me up. “Where’s dad…” I say. “No.” “NO” I scream, crying and running home. I close myself in my room. Red doesn’t have parents, surely I can have just a mom. I open my door and hug mom. “My brave baby” she says.
Week 4(21)


It was a lesson day. I played the violin. I was going to Elementary school. I grabbed my violin and back pack. “Your bus is here!!!” shouted mom. I ran outside and just got there as the bus was about to leave. The bus stopped at the school and everyone crowded to get out. As we walked across the green field, I tripped on a stick. The prickly grass bruised my knees and elbows. Rye, my best friend, walks me to the nurse and the nurse bandaged my cuts. I was sent home, but got to play my violin online!!


Week 3(21)

“What’s up!!!” I say. My best friend Olivia is on the phone. “I have big news, ” she answers. “What!” I ask. “Amy asked me to be in her group and I said yes!!!!” she said in a rush. Amy is the most popular girl. “You are sooo lucky!!” “ have to go,” I hang up. The next day at lunch Olivia walks to Amys table. Amy holds out her foot and trips Olivia, laughing. Olivia’s cheeks turn red as she hurrys into the bathroom. After school, I try to call Olivia, but she doesn’t answer. They never should have said yes

19 comments:

  1. i think it was amazing and i love how you said "olivias cheeks turn red" because i could picture it~Zenaida:)

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  2. I love the plot of the story and the detail. ~Ellie

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  3. Katherine i like how you sarted with Whats up to get me interesterd.It did!

    Soleil Dupuis

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  4. I really liked your ending of how you got to play the violin online and how much detail you had! -Lizzie Lamme

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  5. You have put so much into this story about a war, Katherine. The mood changes as your story develops. Half way through we think everything is OK and then you bring some real sadness to the story. The way you get the charters in the story talking to each other makes it feel even more real. There are also some excellent descriptions in your writing. I particularly like ‘crazy commotion in the tower’.

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  6. Hi Katherine
    I hope I'm commenting in the correct space as I couldn't see any space to comment under week 7. You've really used the prompt for this week's 100 word challenge in a very creative way weaving a really interesting story. You've created some great images in your writing for example the image of you in your red dress dancing to the beat across the concrete and then Fluffy the cat just walking around you. I love happy endings and your story certainly had a happy ending. Well done. Excellent writing for the 100 word challenge. Do keep up the good work.
    Máire O'Keeffe (Team 100wc) Galway Ireland

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  7. I liked your week 9 piece. I especially like how you did a little cliffhanger at the end. Can't wait to see what happens to those kids!
    ~Cara C.

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  8. I love you week 9 one too! For the same resons as cara.Keep up the GREAT work.
    ~Soleil

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  9. Hello Katherine, I really like how you have set up the excitement in this story and the drama of your character falling out of the carriage. It was good too how you didn't leave any doubt in the readers mind about the authenticity of your story, by having your character's cuts and scratches fixed up. It might have seemed a bit unreal if they had fallen out of the carriage and didn't have any injuries. Well done. (Cath, Team100, Melbourne, Australia)

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  10. I loved your week 7 one! I love how you described things with the words in the mix,like wean you said "I grabbed my RED dress and DANCED to the beat across our CONCRETE driveway." You used RED and DANCED in you senins to describe something. Keep up the great work! Loved your other storys too! ~Soleil

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  11. hi!katherine. i really like your week 8 story the part at the first were it says. goal!the red team won . clare stomps her feet . so why i liked it is because after clare stamped at the ground she was still courageous to tell that we can still do it the next round . she was not sad but instead she was courageous that next time she plays she will win . so that's the part where i like the most . -suzanna sara cherian

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  12. I love your stories they are sooooooo GOOD - By HANNAH

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  13. Hi Katherine, I liked your stories because the way you write them make me want to read more. Great story. From Kyle in Ms Brennocks class. Here is the link to our blog: https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

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  14. I think your story about the dragon was cool
    -ari

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  15. I loved your week 14 100 word challang!!!!!!I LOVED the part we're it said " I let out the breath I didn’t know I was holding." It was sooooo curative and i liked that you showed she was scared by saying " “AHHHH!!” a woman, made out of plastic, came running, Screaming at the top of her lungs!" I loved it!!!
    ~SOLEIL

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  16. you have been showcased cool

    from brian S

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  17. I love it, this is amazing- Suhaani

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  18. hello katherine I like your week 14 and how you were creative with the dress and that you made a plastic monster good story. mason

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  19. I love your use of short sentences and dialogue to pace your story. Well done on a very gripping read.
    Ms Young (Team 100) London UK

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