Jennavieve

Week 6 (21)


I was walking down a dark hallway with my friend and then I remembered I had to drop off my cello. “See you in the first class. I have to drop off my cello,” I said to her walking in the other direction. “Ok!” she responded very quickly. I ran down the hall and I saw a jar on the floor that was not clear. I stopped so quickly that my shoes screeched. “Oops,” I said. I was afraid to open the jar but I had to see what was inside. There was a big hairy spider in the jar.

Week 5 (21)


Museum

Me, my mom and dad were going to visit a history museum. I have never been to a history museum before. There were many cool facts and things to see. We came across a sculpture of men standing by a cannon looking like they are going to fire it. I studied each man and what they were doing. The one I studied very closely was the man reaching down to get a white object. I wondered what it was. The sign said there were many different battles and a lot of people were killed. I had a great time.

Week 4(21)


VIOLIN CLASS SHORTCUT PROBLEM

One day I was very very late for violin class. I decided to take a short cut. I walked through the woods. Tripped on a rock and fell in the green, prickly vines. I was all bruised up. I got up and went to violin class. My violin teacher saw me and ran over. “Are you all right?” She asked. “No.” I replied. She sent me over to the waiting room and went to call my mom. “What will my mom say?” She thought. My mom came in and talked to me. She was not mad.

week 3

Club

My best friend wants to start a club after school. She asked the school if she could use a class room. The school said yes. When she asked me to join I knew it was a bad idea. They should have never said yes. I did not want to hurt my friend’s feelings so I said yes. Started only a few days ago. I ran home to tell my mom and dad. They thought it was nice of them to let her use a class room. The club is about spying… that is worrying me. What will I do?

4 comments:

  1. I like how you made your character go into the shortcut and get all bruised it is very creative and gives a lot of detail ~Lizzie

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  2. I think you did a really good job on your week 4 I really liked it.

    -from natalia ortiz

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  3. the story about spying is pulling me in. maybe do more sometime?!
    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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  4. Hi Gennavieve,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I liked how you approached the Week 5 prompt. I love history and sculptures like this get us to ask questions. I had to go back and look at the photo again. I wonder what that white object was?
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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