Jacob




Week 35 (21)

Which way to the shops?’ He panted as he ran down to the river. This is one of those stories where the good guy gets chased by the bad guy because he stole his crispy chicken tenders and super dark ketchup. “ It’s Friday and I just want to go home. It's 2:34 and there are two things I care about: going home and you liking the story”. The bad news is that the bad guy went to get some chick fil a the good guy got to the shops he ate the bad guys chicken tenders. “That it goodbye”.


Week 30 (21)

Enclosed spaces are my worst nightmare ¨but guess what. I got invited to my friend's birthday party and were going to a trap room.¨ Just the sound of that makes me want to throw up. When I get trapped like that I freeze up and panic. When I got there my friend insisted we go in before we eat. When we started to walk in I could feel the sweat dripping down my face. without hesitation I screamed ¨I can't do it¨ suddenly darkness enveloped the room. And it was to late the door had closed ¨No No No.

Week 29 (21)

Today Anthony Hendrick was moving along with his parents Mr and Mrs Hendrick. Thay had been moving to a new house in a new neighborhood, but no matter how far he went he never forgot his friend Mike. Before they left Mike gave Anthany a golden dove and said never forget me anthany ¨ i won´t¨. As the Hendricks drove off into the darkness of the night. When Anthony got to the new house he called his fiend Mike right when he pressed the green call button mike picked up he said he was happy but not the same.

Week 28 (21)

Tuesday 20th: Was the first day of hunting season. My dad, my brother and I were planning on going hunting then it started to rain. My brother and I counted the drops one by one until we felt nauseous we walked to the kitchen. Mom was making stew. I felt the sorrow of the cold rainy day. My dad woke me and my brother up at around 5:00 and he said “we have to get the buck”. He said he was going to hang the horns above the bed. I Felt bad as it let out a pitiful howl


Week 27 (21)


 Have you ever seen an elephant with giant purple ears? When I first saw an elephant I felt as if my air supply had grown and I got all my troubles off my back. A part of me wanted to touch the elephant. The elephant felt pressured the zookepers were playing violin too. The violins had been painted purple. The elephant showed signs of joy and suddenly a smile came to my face. I was happy the rest of they day i wondered why people couldn't as nice as those keepers. All people need is to be nice or care.    


GES ONLY week


0ne year ago today i saw a very interesting guy on a ladder because his driveway had just got paved. he has a weird taste because he had red pavement it turns out he dropped his phone in the pavement so he was trying to pull it out. then the fire fighters showed up and then when they saw what the problem was there were determined to get the phone out. the pavement was in a tremendous globe of asphalt with gold coins smothered all over the globe some girl walked by and said ¨nice glob¨ he answered with ¨thanks¨.  

Week 23 (21)

I never thought I would see such a brown balloon Kicked away never to be seen again. Until some creepy guy walked into the alley and grabbed the brown balloon he had on a frightening suit and a pink tie. When he came out of the alley everyone starred then they realised that he had grabbed the balloon. Now one had ever seen the guy in the brown suit before so they were shocked to see someone new in this town because know one ever come’s into our town its like a ghost town but there is actually people living.


Week 22 (21)

“… ,but where did it go?” Joseph shouted…

   Joseph lost his teddy bear and he needed it to sleep because it kept him calm and it was cofterbal.  Later that night Joseph was invited to a sleepover and when he got there his friend made fun of the teddy bear one of the boys called Joseph sippy cup.  They called him sippy cup the rest of the sleepover when he woke up. His bear was gone his friends said they didn't know but then he felt his heart beating and then he broke out “but where did it go?” Joseph shouted “I know you have it".  “Under the?


Week 20 (21)

    Three days ago Roy jacksons bike went missing.  His dad was the mayor of Shelbyville.  When Roy's bike was stolen his parents put up signs of what the bike looked like.  When me and Jimmy heard we went on a quest to find the bike we connected the dots for days and we remembered that Roy hit Miss Clancy's car a week ago and said to Roy ``Soon that bike will be gone”.  So the next day we went to go interview Miss Clancy and we asked her what annoyed her and  the first thing she said ¨that Roy Jackson''. 
         



Week 19 (21)
There we were in the parking lot of okemo. We woke up at five in the morning to go skiing at okemo and we were finally there.  When we were trying to find a friend's car and then a minute later. I spotted the white chevy silvarodo.  When we got to the loge we walked over to the chair lyft and when we were almost at the top the chair lyft came to a sudden stop bash we all nudged forward. I had a thought that I think all of us had when it just wouldnet take off then start.  


Week 16 (21)
One morning I woke up. It was 6:00 am and I looked outside as the Sun was shining on my window.  I heard the birds chirping, Then everything stopped and.  I didn't know what to do  because my parents will probably still be asleep.  so I went downstairs and my dog Betty was just laying down. I said “come  here girl” so Betty got up and I took her out so she could use the bathroom. When I got back in I picked up Betty's aluminum bowl and filled it with dog food. Then i went back to bed. 


Week 13 (21)
It was 10:00 am and I was on my way to my lacrosse game.  I had a soccer game befor and my team one i had a headband but i left it at home.  We were on our way to the field and I found my headband was on my neck.  I didn’t remember puting it on.  The first game my team  won the second game we won and third game we one as a team.  Then after my game I got some fried dough.  On the way home i saw a ded racoon and thought of my geco.   

Week 11 (21)
 
One day I was on a hike with my family.  It was so nice out the sound of rolling leaves, the birds chirping and a gust of wind.  We saw a bunch of cool animals, flowers and a crafty white castel.  My dog munchkin was barking at all of the bird’s.  My dad thought we should go explor the white castle.  As we walked to the creepy castle we heard a crack of thunder as if we were in a horror movie when we got in me and my mom heard an evil lagh and wonderd where dad was “NO”


Week 10 (21)

Yes, we were going to get some food at Spicy rice.  Spicy rice was my favorit plase to eat and I love their cheeseburge.  If only it was a bit smaller it is so big it is about the size of my face? “ John” I heard my dad say. I responded with “ya dad” “we have to go in a minute” “ok”. When we got to the restaurant we parcked the car and put in our order and waited an hour for the food to come.  When they started to walk out I saw the oversized burger it was huge.  

Week 9 (21)
LIVE AT 11:00 “this just in” “The world's largest bee ever found in Springfield it’s recorded to be 4 feet in height & 5 feet in length. Oh and homer simpson seems to be going towards the giant bee.” Homer says “That's my fat and ugly dad you're poking.” “oh shut up homer”. “Your fat to” “oh okay you get my father out of that giant bee.” “Oh dad are you okay” “yes my boy.” you want to go to krusty’s yes i'm going to get the double burger “doogh” “and i think i need some food to” same here.’

Week 5 (21)

It was 1945 and Jimmy had just got on the Normandy cliff and in the trench up on the cliff he had seen 4 german soldiers then he ran. When he got up and out of the trench he ran to an abandone building hoping that Jake would have been there if it was him. Jimmy thought he told Jake we have to start pushing the Germans back. They had already lost their friend early on when they took cover behind a huge tank. when he stepeddack into the battlefield he saw a mortar explode.
To be continued
week 3 (21)
One day my friends and I joined the group chat for a minute and then my friend started talking pranks. He said that he was going to TP the O'connors he asked if we wanted to join him. My other friend said yes to him but I said no thanks. The rest of the call they tried to make me come so then I left. The next day I thought I would go on a bike ride past the o'connors and there are all four of my friends doing their yard work. They never should have said yes to him.

Practice Week




Today I saw the weirdest thing. So my day started of by

going on a bike ride. Me and my friend Billy always like to go on

a nice Saturday morning bike ride. I was picking Billy up a 11: 00

It was Currently 10:50.When I got to Billy's house we did a few laps

in his neighborhood. I asked him if he could teach me how to

wheelie.



But Billy said then you're going to be showing off what I taught you. When I turned the corner Billy said Tommy look at him it is Mr. Finnegan.

32 comments:

  1. Jacob try to get to 100 words

    keep up the good work Theo carle

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  2. Great job all tohe it needs a 100 words it is great Joey Aloy

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  3. I love your story, make sure you have 100 words though!
    ~Amina A

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  4. Good stories! I like how much detail you put in. ~Lizzie ;)

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  5. I liked how you had it was 1994.It showed that the coved was not happing. But it showed that it was a long time ago.

    Soleil Dupuis

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  6. Jacob the battle of normandy was in 1944

    Theo

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  7. I liked how you showed lots of details.


    -Cliff

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  8. I loved your week 10 one. It was funny how you described the huge cheesberger!Keep up the good work! ~Soleil

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  9. good work Jacob just make sure your I's are capital like this "I"- By Ahmet Dagli (you may not know me but I am not new)

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  10. i think your week 11 is cool
    -ari

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  11. yoo Jacob I like how you added the time in week 13 good gob and I like how you made it a mistery at the end

    mason

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  12. I never knew lacrosse games were that early!
    Ahmet

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  13. Hi !!!
    I LOVE YOUR STORY < ITS ALL GOOD < ITS EPIC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    SUZANNA SARA CHERIAN

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  14. Jacob,I love your Week 3 story! My favorite part was when it said "He said that he was going to TP the O'connors he asked if we wanted to join him." - Elliott

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  15. it was really funny when they called him a sippy cup. But I feel bad for him :-) Sippy cup
    ~Connor

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  16. I like how your stories are action packed.

    -Morgan

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  17. i liked week five it was funny lol -ryley

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  18. Your week 23 story was really funny and great!
    Asher =)

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  19. I like when you said I felt the sorrow of the cold rainy day it showed me what you were feeling.
    -Jayden

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  20. nice clif hanger on 29



    garrett

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  21. Jacob, good job on week 30.I liked that the setting was in a escape room. Keep up the good writing!
    -Theo

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  22. I lIkE yOuR wEeK 30 StOrY bEcAuSe Of HoW yOu SaId. " Enclosed spaces are my worst nightmare ¨but guess what. I got invited to my friend's birthday party and were going to a trap room. GrEaT sToRy JaCoB

    ~CoNnOr

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  23. I lIkE yOuR wEeK 30 StOrY bEcAuSe Of HoW yOu SaId. " Enclosed spaces are my worst nightmare ¨but guess what. I got invited to my friend's birthday party and were going to a trap room. GrEaT sToRy JaCoB

    ~CoNnOr

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  24. nice week 30 i like the intenchaty






    garrett

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  25. Jacob, your week 16 story was very descriptive! You described a lot of things in your story! And I love how you added a dog!

    Asher =)

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  26. jacob I liked your 100 wc 30 because your character had a fear and than it was to late
    Anthony

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  27. Jacob, your week 13 story was very awesome! I liked how you talked about lacrosse and how you didn't know you were wearing your headband!

    Asher =)

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  28. Great story i found it very pleasing to my appetite.

    ~Connor

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  29. your week 35 was really funny
    -ari

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  30. Jacob, good job on your week 35 100wc, I like it when they said "This is one of those stories where the good guy gets chased by the bad guy because he stole his crispy chicken tenders and super dark ketchup." Good story jacob! -Theo

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