Jackie

Week 16 (21)
I was at the subway station in new york city,  and I was waiting for the train when I saw a guy just fall down,  everything stopped and stared at him,  but he wouldn't get up.  He didn't have a pulse either,  someone called 911 and the ambulance came and got the guy and said,  “You dummies this is a manikin!”  but everyone thought he was real!  Turns out he was real and the medics were the dummies and they got fired because they didn't take him to the hospital,  and they gave him to a store thinking it was...

Week 13 (21)  To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of the page.



I shot awake to the sound of my name.
“Queenie!” A young girl whispered.
“Who are you? And how do you know my name?”I buzzed.

“I’m Princess Jenna! I was in the throne room when you introduced yourself to my parents, King Robin and Queen Sabrina.”  She reached over and adjusted the tag on my antenna. I didn’t remember putting it on.

“Maybe we could be friends?” She giggled “We have a lot in common, as long as we ignore the fact your a giant alien bee” 

I immediately took a liking to her and grinned “I’d like that.”



Week 11 (21)
I heard the leaves crunching as the giant monster rolled its round feet down the path, like the white hot anger rolling through my veins. 
We lurched to a stop. One of the crafty worker-Earth-dwellers entered the belly of the monster and tried to put a leash on my head.
“Must I put it on?” I moaned.
“No, but it would be helpful if you did.” she sighed.
I bowed my head. We must always be helpful, no matter the circumstances. That’s the Jupiti way.
We exited and I tensed. Standing there was a huge, pink castle. I hate pink.


Week 19 (21)  To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.


My eyelids started to flutter open and gasped.

Earth-dwellers were trying to load me into the gaping mouth of a monster!

“If only it was a bit smaller” One of the workers muttered.

“OI! WATCH THE WINGS!” I buzzed angrily as I wrenched myself out of their grubby little hands. I flapped my wings and brandished my stinger. “ALSO, I HAVE A NAME!!!!!”

All of the Earth-dwellers cowered in fear. One even whimpered!

 Suddenly, the lead Earth-dweller shoved me into the creature’s dark maw. 
‘HELPPPP!’  was the last thing that I screamed before the mouth rolled shut.

TO BE CONTINUED!


Week 9 (21)
I was buzzing around the galaxy, occasionally dipping back into my home planet, Jupiter, for food.
I had resolved some time ago that today, I would fly as close to the enemy planet, Venus, as possible. I’m a spy for Jupiter’s military. Today, I will find out where they're weak point is, so we can use it in battle tomorrow.
Hours later, I floated in empty space. I almost got caught twice! At least I found a weak point. 
I was so tired, I collapsed on the planet Earth. Soon, I drifted into a deep, dreamless sleep.... 

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

Week 8 (21)





Someone snached Sam’s well earned donut off her plate.


“Hey! I paid for that!”she yelled.


“Really? Well, mine now!” Shannon, the school bully, smiled sweetly.


“Give me my donut!” Sam growled.


Shannon frowned, “I told you already, ‘mine now!’” and took a giant bite out of Sam’s donut.


“Um, Shannon?” Lia whispered. “You know how protective Sam is of her food.”


Shannon just laughed.


Sam’s vision tinted red, exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists and swung them as hard she could.


That’s why she got suspended.


On the bright side, no one ever took her food again.


Week 7 (21)


I watched the concrete slowly get closer to my face and braced myself for the impact. I couldn’t hear the bully, Sandra Anderson, through the roar of my mind.


I was about to get a face full of pavement when strong arms grabbed my waist and lifted me up. The boy checked if I was okay, took off on his red scooter, and didn’t look back.

Later, I curled up on the back porch with my dog, Fluffy. We watched as the fireflies danced the night away. I thought about my nameless hero and silently thanking him for saving me.

Week 5 (21)


I woke up in a strange place. Where was I? Cannons could be heard everywhere.

I was in the bunker! I shot straight up... and immediately fell straight back down and felt a giant wave of nausea wash over me.

“Don’t move!” A lady worried. “You were found outside with a very big cut on your torso. You must stay still so I can treat it,”. How did this happen? First I was in the museum. Then I touched the special knife that almost killed my grandfather. Then, somehow, I came here! Hmm…. Was the knife cursed?!?!


TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Week4 (21)


Two violinists clutched their instruments and stopped for a second. They were bruised and had many scratches, for they had just run through a prickly briar patch.

“ Come on, Charlie! We have to get going. We must reach the town!” The older traveler, Noah, called.

“ k… OW! How come you got less scratches?!?” Charlie mumbled angrily.

Noah frowned. “You should change your pants, Charlie. They got ripped up.”

“Fine.” Charlie hid and changed into some green tights. When she came out she found Noah playing his violin.

She helped him up and they continued bickering as they walked to town.

Practice Week

I rode my bicycle to the farm to get vegetables for my family. I waved to my neighbor, Mrs. Mindel.

“ Hello, Mrs. Mindel!” I called.

“Hello, Michael. Could you grab my vegetables from the farm, too?” She asked.

“ Sure!” I grinned.

“Thank you!” she waved as I continued my journey.

20 minutes later, I headed back from the farm to my neighborhood, I wasn’t paying close enough attention to the road and my bike hit a rock. The vegetables flew everywhere and I sailed through the air and crashed into the hay bale.




And that’s the story behind this photo!




The purple background represents the story. :)

12 comments:

  1. i like how it was aconversation to start it off ari.s

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  2. I like how you added a different character in the story, because it gives more detail of how he fell into the hay bale -Lizzie Lamme

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  3. I LOVED how you added differint caricters in your story too.

    Soleil Dupuis

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  4. I like the way your story began in the middle of what ever adventure or misadventure Charlie and Noah were having; something must have happened to find them wandering through a briar patch. I also appreciated how you changed from a cactus to a briar patch, both being spiky but very different things.

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  5. I like how you used imagination in the story and then you asked if there was a knife curse, that was a very cool story -Lizzie Lamme

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  6. I LOVED your week 5 one! It was very werd...But in a GREAT way. I liked the part were it said "i felt a giant wave of nausea wash over me." It was soooooo curative!!!!But im a little mad that you made it a "To be continued!!"But canyou tell me on the bus if the knife was cursed or not? But over all I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!!!! Keep up the GREAT work!
    ~Your werd frend Soleil

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  7. ¨We have a lot in common! As long as we ignore the fact that your a giant alien bee¨ That line is so funny. -Ellie

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  8. - I liked all your story but my fav was week 13 it was a great story that's why you got it showcased because it was so cool.😄
    -Natalia

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  9. I liked how when you said what and who are you I BUZZED cool

    Ahmet

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  10. Wow Jackie, that story that got showcased was amazing and really funny! I really liked your beginning! Really nice job!

    Asher LaPierre =) <3

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