Jackie

GES ONLY week

Emma and Piper stiffened, while Queenie started sinking into a hole of despair like she was made of pavement.
“What happened?! Queenie are you okay!?” Fifi asked, alarmed. 
“What did you do?!”Ash snarled at Piper and Emma, his eyes glowing red, glittering like coins. 
“It wasn’t their fault!” Queenie suddenly sobbed “I saw King and then...!”
“It wasn’t your fault! It was the rebels!” Piper soothed.
“But I let him go!” Queenie shuddered, silent sobs making tears stream down her face.
A clanging noise was heard, very close to them, like a ladder falling down.
“Not again!” Emma groaned.


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“You saw KING!!!!!!” Ash and Fifi gasped. They looked like fish out of water. 
“Yeah! Emma’s parents hosted a party and I saw him! It was fun, although I was stuck under a cart.” Queenie playfully glared at the girls. Emma shrugged sheepishly.
“Why the heck were you under a cart, Q?!” Fifi frowned “And if you saw King, where is he now? And do I smell Marmite?”
“It wasn’t my idea to be under the cart, and do you hate Marmite, Fi?” Queenie said defensively.
“No”, she said, “I like Marmite. But you didn’t answer my question. Where’s King?”

Week 25 (21)
The tigers caught sight of Emma and Piper, half-hidden in the trees, standing there open-mouthed like statues.
“Humans” Fifi sneered disdainfully. 
“OOH! Can we kill ‘em!?!?” Ash said excitedly. “No!” Emma squeaked “No, you can’t!!”
Queenie rolled her eyes and stepped between her friends. “Ash and Fi, meet Emma and Piper. Emma and Pipes, This is Ash and Fifi.” She introduced.
Piper shook her head and tried to focus on her friend’s grinning face. “Queenie. Please Explain.”
Queenie laughed. “They’re my best friends from Jupiter. Oh, guys, I got news! We saw King!”
The tigers stared at Queenie, jaws dropped.


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“All done!” Piper said as she finished dressing Queenie’s wounds.
“Was extremely painful,” Queenie mumbled.
“I could barely see!”
“Mhmm”
“Guys!” Emma shushed “something’s coming!”
“Behind the trees!” Queenie whispered, pushing them into the forest.
Suddenly, two brightly colored Saber-toothed tigers pounced into the glade, one green and one orange. They looked around, wearing matching confused expressions.
The orange one spoke first “Ash, are you sure you heard her scream? We were miles away.” 
The blinding-white tiger, Ash, replied “I swear I heard Queenie, Fifi!”
“Ash? Fifi?” Queenie sobbed.
“Queenie!?!?!?!?!?!”
Emma and Piper looked at each other. What’s going on?


Week 23 (21)
 
Emma and Piper shot awake to the sound of a balloon popping and the voice of Queenie shrieking. 
“Queenie!” Emma called into the pitch-black night “Are you ok?”
“NO! A giant, frightening, brown Balloon-Monster attacked me and kicked my butt and I couldn’t pop it because I couldn’t see anything!” came Emma’s answer.
“The balloon dude’s gone, right?” Emma questioned.
“Yeah. I think it accidentally stepped on a sharp rock.” Queenie giggled then cursed “Well, shoot. That’s not good.”
“Are you hurt?” Piper asked worriedly.
 “No.” Queenie touched her face “Scratch that, my face is bleeding.”
Piper sighed “I’m coming.”

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“…, but where did it go?” she shouted…

They sprinted until they couldn’t walk another step.
“We should set up camp” Queenie suggested as the sunset painted the sky.
“With what?” Piper asked.
“I brought a tent.” Emma tried to take out a magic collapsible tent from her coat pocket, but she came up with nothing.
“What! I could’ve sworn it was here! I grabbed it and put it in my coat, but where did it go?” she shouted in despair.
“It’s fine! You guys can sleep on the ground. I’ll stay up to be a guard.” Queenie sighed.
The other girls groaned. It’ll be a LOOONG night.
Week 20 (21)
The girls fell deathly silent, more terrified now that they knew what it was and why it was here. 
The Snoodler looked around some more. He could have sworn he had seen something in the clearing. Since there was nothing there, he decided to take a nap. He tied his bike to a tree, lay down, and fell asleep.
The girls breathed a synchronized sigh of relief. Queenie took hold of Piper’s and Emma’s hands and they tiptoed out of the clearing.
They got about 20 feet before they ran like the wind heading deeper, and deeper into the forest. 

Week 19 (21)
They watched the creature, tense, barely remembering to breathe, in fear the monster would catch them. When it just wouldn’t take off, Queenie said that she would sneak around and try to get a good look at the creature’s face. 
She crept around the edge of the clearing, staying hidden in the shadows. Once she got close enough, she looked up and squeaked in fear, immediately shrinking and buzzing back to the girls. 
“It’s a Venusian!” Queenie gasped, face pale and terrified “A giant with 31 eyes! My enemy from Venus! Do you think he’s looking for…. King and I?”


Week 18 (21)

We stopped and tried to catch our breaths. I looked back, desperate to see King again.
“We’ll find Kingston,” Emma assured. I almost started sobbing at the sound of his name.
“Obvi-” I started to say ‘Obviously!’ , but I was cut off by the sound of crunching leaves. 
We dove behind a bush and turned around to find a giant,  yellow monster pulling into the clearing, riding an equally giant bicycle. He scanned the trees greedily, looking for something. 
“My parents warned me never to go into the north woods! This must be why! There are monsters everywhere!” Emma gasped.

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“RUN!” Piper screamed. She grabbed my arm and ran.
Rebels had bombed the palace when everyone was at the ball!
“Kingston!” I screamed, hoping, wishing, praying, I would get a reply. It broke my heart when I didn’t hear his voice in return.
“Wait…… Emma… and… King!” I sobbed.
“Emma will meet us at the gates!”
“KINGSTON!” I cried, looking back towards the  blazing fires.

When we got to the gates, Emma was waiting. We tore through the woods leaving the suffocating smoke and fire behind, my feet pounding out a terrifying mantra with each step. 
He could be dead.

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I shot awake to the sound of my name.
“Queenie!” A young girl whispered.
“Who are you? And how do you know my name?”I buzzed.

“I’m Princess Jenna! I was in the throne room when you introduced yourself to my parents, King Robin and Queen Sabrina.”  She reached over and adjusted the tag on my antenna. I didn’t remember putting it on.

“Maybe we could be friends?” She giggled “We have a lot in common, as long as we ignore the fact your a giant alien bee” 

I immediately took a liking to her and grinned “I’d like that.”



Week 11 (21)
I heard the leaves crunching as the giant monster rolled its round feet down the path, like the white hot anger rolling through my veins. 
We lurched to a stop. One of the crafty worker-Earth-dwellers entered the belly of the monster and tried to put a leash on my head.
“Must I put it on?” I moaned.
“No, but it would be helpful if you did.” she sighed.
I bowed my head. We must always be helpful, no matter the circumstances. That’s the Jupiti way.
We exited and I tensed. Standing there was a huge, pink castle. I hate pink.


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My eyelids started to flutter open and gasped.

Earth-dwellers were trying to load me into the gaping mouth of a monster!

“If only it was a bit smaller” One of the workers muttered.

“OI! WATCH THE WINGS!” I buzzed angrily as I wrenched myself out of their grubby little hands. I flapped my wings and brandished my stinger. “ALSO, I HAVE A NAME!!!!!”

All of the Earth-dwellers cowered in fear. One even whimpered!

 Suddenly, the lead Earth-dweller shoved me into the creature’s dark maw. 
‘HELPPPP!’  was the last thing that I screamed before the mouth rolled shut.

TO BE CONTINUED!


Week 9 (21)
I was buzzing around the galaxy, occasionally dipping back into my home planet, Jupiter, for food.
I had resolved some time ago that today, I would fly as close to the enemy planet, Venus, as possible. I’m a spy for Jupiter’s military. Today, I will find out where they're weak point is, so we can use it in battle tomorrow.
Hours later, I floated in empty space. I almost got caught twice! At least I found a weak point. 
I was so tired, I collapsed on the planet Earth. Soon, I drifted into a deep, dreamless sleep.... 

TO BE CONTINUED!!!

Week 8 (21)





Someone snached Sam’s well earned donut off her plate.


“Hey! I paid for that!”she yelled.


“Really? Well, mine now!” Shannon, the school bully, smiled sweetly.


“Give me my donut!” Sam growled.


Shannon frowned, “I told you already, ‘mine now!’” and took a giant bite out of Sam’s donut.


“Um, Shannon?” Lia whispered. “You know how protective Sam is of her food.”


Shannon just laughed.


Sam’s vision tinted red, exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists and swung them as hard she could.


That’s why she got suspended.


On the bright side, no one ever took her food again.


Week 7 (21)


I watched the concrete slowly get closer to my face and braced myself for the impact. I couldn’t hear the bully, Sandra Anderson, through the roar of my mind.


I was about to get a face full of pavement when strong arms grabbed my waist and lifted me up. The boy checked if I was okay, took off on his red scooter, and didn’t look back.

Later, I curled up on the back porch with my dog, Fluffy. We watched as the fireflies danced the night away. I thought about my nameless hero and silently thanking him for saving me.

Week 5 (21)


I woke up in a strange place. Where was I? Cannons could be heard everywhere.

I was in the bunker! I shot straight up... and immediately fell straight back down and felt a giant wave of nausea wash over me.

“Don’t move!” A lady worried. “You were found outside with a very big cut on your torso. You must stay still so I can treat it,”. How did this happen? First I was in the museum. Then I touched the special knife that almost killed my grandfather. Then, somehow, I came here! Hmm…. Was the knife cursed?!?!


TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Week4 (21)


Two violinists clutched their instruments and stopped for a second. They were bruised and had many scratches, for they had just run through a prickly briar patch.

“ Come on, Charlie! We have to get going. We must reach the town!” The older traveler, Noah, called.

“ k… OW! How come you got less scratches?!?” Charlie mumbled angrily.

Noah frowned. “You should change your pants, Charlie. They got ripped up.”

“Fine.” Charlie hid and changed into some green tights. When she came out she found Noah playing his violin.

She helped him up and they continued bickering as they walked to town.

Practice Week

I rode my bicycle to the farm to get vegetables for my family. I waved to my neighbor, Mrs. Mindel.

“ Hello, Mrs. Mindel!” I called.

“Hello, Michael. Could you grab my vegetables from the farm, too?” She asked.

“ Sure!” I grinned.

“Thank you!” she waved as I continued my journey.

20 minutes later, I headed back from the farm to my neighborhood, I wasn’t paying close enough attention to the road and my bike hit a rock. The vegetables flew everywhere and I sailed through the air and crashed into the hay bale.




And that’s the story behind this photo!




The purple background represents the story. :)

29 comments:

  1. i like how it was aconversation to start it off ari.s

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  2. I like how you added a different character in the story, because it gives more detail of how he fell into the hay bale -Lizzie Lamme

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  3. I LOVED how you added differint caricters in your story too.

    Soleil Dupuis

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  4. I like the way your story began in the middle of what ever adventure or misadventure Charlie and Noah were having; something must have happened to find them wandering through a briar patch. I also appreciated how you changed from a cactus to a briar patch, both being spiky but very different things.

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  5. I like how you used imagination in the story and then you asked if there was a knife curse, that was a very cool story -Lizzie Lamme

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  6. I LOVED your week 5 one! It was very werd...But in a GREAT way. I liked the part were it said "i felt a giant wave of nausea wash over me." It was soooooo curative!!!!But im a little mad that you made it a "To be continued!!"But canyou tell me on the bus if the knife was cursed or not? But over all I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!!!! Keep up the GREAT work!
    ~Your werd frend Soleil

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  7. ¨We have a lot in common! As long as we ignore the fact that your a giant alien bee¨ That line is so funny. -Ellie

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  8. - I liked all your story but my fav was week 13 it was a great story that's why you got it showcased because it was so cool.😄
    -Natalia

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  9. I liked how when you said what and who are you I BUZZED cool

    Ahmet

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  10. Wow Jackie, that story that got showcased was amazing and really funny! I really liked your beginning! Really nice job!

    Asher LaPierre =) <3

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  11. Wow! That was a very scary story, although I kept wondering where the tree was going to show up. You conveyed the panic in your characters very well.

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  12. Hi Jackie ,
    You are so good at writing story ,all your story is good keep on doing the great work .
    Suzanna Sara Cherian

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  13. Well done Jackie, you've done a great job with the prompt this week. I really enjoyed your story. It is very imaginative and I can visualise the action taking place very clearly. Great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin

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  14. Hi Jackie,
    I liked reading your week 20 story! You have really great description words, you also have intresting story plots, which I really enjoy reading!
    Keep up the awesome writing.
    -Gemma Sela,

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  15. AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I loved your week 13!!!!! It was soooooo great!!!! I love this part, "“I’m Princess Jenna! I was in the throne room when you introduced yourself to my parents, King Robin and Queen Sabrina.” She reached over and adjusted the tag on my antenna. I didn’t remember putting it on." I love how you put in the line thing-e-ma-bob!!! It was very curative and so funny!!! Keep righting!!!! BYE!!!!
    ~SOLEIL!!!!

    :)

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  16. Jackie,
    Re Week 21
    Well done on some terrific description. For example, "sunset painted the sky", “she shouted in despair", "the other girls groaned". It really enhanced your writing.
    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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  17. I liked your week 21 piece! It really gave a sence of who the characters really are, and the dialoug showed their personality.
    -Cara C.

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  18. Hi i liked week 23 when you said they shot up with a sound of the balloon popping . Nice work

    Suzanna

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  19. I really liked how you made a brown balloon monster in your story, it was very funny. Keep up the good work
    ~Lizzie

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  20. Hi Jackie,
    I liked your week 22 work and how you started with a question. I also like how you add multiple characters.
    Keep writing.
    -Emma Cohort#4

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  21. Wow! Last week's chalange (week 24) was amazing! I will find myself wondering all week what's going to happen to Queenie and her friends. I love how you've continued this story since week 13! Keep up the good work! I'll be reading next week!\
    ~Cara C.

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  22. I like that you have lots of characters in your stories, I most of the time only have 2-3 characters.

    -Morgan

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  23. hey jackie, i like how your weeks 13-25 are all one big continuing story, its really cool how you keep the same story with different prompts -Zenaida <3 :D

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  24. I loved your week 25 work! It's so well put together, like how everything seems to connect. That's harder then it looks. Good job! Keep writing so we can see the end of this story!!
    ~Cara C.

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  25. i like your start of the story it is amazing Joseph

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  26. Hi jackie i liked your week 26 it was fun to read at the first part they both looked like a fish out of water .That just made me laugh for some reason .

    Suzanna Sara Cherian

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  27. Wow! Week 26 was great! I love how you take the prompt from every week and make it all connect. Nice work, keep writing!
    ~Cara C.

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