Eriella

Week 30 (21)

Amy was watching the window. “BOOM” “CRASH”

She was terrified and walked to her moms room. 

“Lets go to the living room.” Her mom took her hand, but when they were walking.

Suddenly, darkness enveloped the room. 

“AAH!” Amy let go of her mom's hand. 

Amy hates the dark a lot.

“You're okay, lets keep going. I have candles to light.” Her mom said, grabbing her hand again. 

As they made it into the living room they heard a                                                ‘BOOM!’ Amy looked outside and a tree fell just before the window. 

“MOM A TREE!” Amy shouted as she backed away.


Week 29 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.

Amy ran across the street

“Mom, Hurry up!” 

Amy ran home, she knew where her house was because her house number is 29. 

It has a black gate, bushes all around, a big rock, and a bright red pole that had the number on it. 

The house looked abandoned on the outside. But, it was really nice on the inside.

“Where's mom?” Dexter asked

“She is slow, i’m faster than her!” Amy stated as she huffed over and over. 

Amy ran to the fridge to get her water bottle as Dexter stepped outside. 

 “Hey mom!” Dexter laughed.

“H-Hey!” She huffed.


Week 28 (21)

Amy ran back inside as it let out a pitiful howl. She was being chased..but by what? She saw a glimpse of it as she ran it didn't look like anything she knew of..

“HELP ME SOMEONE!!” she screeched as she ran. Then she woke up.

“It was a dream..?” she asked, confused. She went downstairs for breakfast. As she was walking down stairs she heard someone at the door and peeked out ‘DING DONG’ Amy ran back upstairs and hid. “W-What was that..” she trembled, uncovering herself..

She went downstairs..”HAPPY 13TH BIRTHDAY AMY! Her family shouted out


Week 27 (21)

“Mom, I know what instrument I want to play!” Amy shouted as she walked through the door. Amy just got home from school. 

“What is it?” her mom questioned. 

“Its violin!” she said with glee.

“I'm happy you chose violin.” her mom said with a smile.

The day Amy got her violin.

“I'm going to paint it purple, with an elephant on it!” Amy squealed as she ran to her room. Amy came back down and Dexter and the mom saw it. 

“Hm nice I guess.” Dexter said, looking up from his phone for one second. 

“Beautiful!” the mom said.


GES only WEEK (21)

 

“So my class is doing a boat challenge.” Amy said to her mom

“Okay what do you need for it” the mom said

“Just cardboard and- Oh wait we're doing an egg drop also but I don’t need to bring anything. But I need to bring some stuff for the sails and I would like red paint.” Amy stated

When their mom came home Amy started building her boat immediately. 

At the school Amy started putting coins but her boat started sinking. Then when they dropped the egg off the ladder and it hit the pavement it cracked. 

Jessica won.   

Week 26 (21) 

“Amy come downstairs!” Dexter said as he hid something. It was Amy's birthday.

“Eww why does it smell like Mmarmite you and I hate it” Amy plugged her nose

“No,” he said, “I like Mmarmite” Dexter said

“Oh happy birthday I got you a little something” Dexter said as he pulled out a lizard from behind his back

“Omg a...LIZARD yes!!’ Amy shouted. Amy loves lizards. She took the lizard to her room. 


Week 25 (21)


Miko was going on a walk, then he saw a statue. 

He was going to come back to it later, but he took a picture of it with him. 

But he saw that it moved and it was walking to him, Miko started to run as fast as he could but the statue caught up. 

The statue scooped him up then took him to a secret bunker. 

Soon Miko found out there was a zombie apocalypse and the statue saved him. “Thank you so much,” Miko cried. 

Week 24 (21)


“Derik Derik!” Amy yelled as she ran through the door

“What Amy?” Derik calmly said back.

“Can I tell you about the dream I had?” Amy asked curiously.

“Fine tell me” Derik wanted to leave at that moment.

Amy started by saying.

“First it was like I woke up. Then I saw two dinosaurs, an orange and a pink one. The orange one spoke first. He said, “I'm a pterodactyl!” As he flew up.

The pink one said he is a T-Rex.


Welcome to GES at FMS.  Your first 100 Word Challenge will be week 22. 

Week 23 (21)

(Remember, the challenge includes writing EXACTLY 100 words. )

“I’m never going to Jessica's party again.”Amy said as she left the balloon. 

“Why not, you got a balloon.” Derik said , confused .

“SHE GAVE ME A BROWN BALLOON” Amy yelled at derik as she kicked her balloon 

Amy thought of how she could be frightening to Abby. “I KNOW” amy yelled

“Be quiet Amy i'm talking with Abby” Derik yelled back annoyed 

“Fine,” Amy said.


Week 22 (21) (This is a great first effort.  Eventually you will be able to stick JUST TO 100 WORDS. Thanks for sharing this piece.)

“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…

“Brother come on time for school!!” Amy shouted at her brother

“I'm coming , I'm coming. Don't forget Monika” Derik said back to her. Monika was Amy's favorite toy donkey she took him anywhere she went. 

“Oh yea thanks,”Amy said to him calmly. They went to school when Amy realized something was wrong...HER DONKEY 

“DERIK DERIK ICAN'T FIND MONIKA” Amy yelled almost crying. 

“Calm down we will find her later,” Derik said, trying to calm her down. ‘But I want her now’ Amy thought so she went to the wood they went to get to school when she saw a tree walking with some toys. 

“What the…” she silently muttered 

“I heard that, I don’t know where your friends are.” the tree said in the darkest voice she ever heard. 

“But where is Monika...but where did it go!!!!!” she shouted. 

“I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOUR LITTLE FRIEND IS” the tree yelled back. 


17 comments:

  1. Ella,
    I am so happy that you are sharing your challenge pieces with your classmates. I love reading your stories. Do you use character names of people in your real life? Like, I wonder if you know a Derik, an Amy, a Jessica, and an Abby?. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G.

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  2. I loved your story!!!! It was so cool!! I loved whej you said "Oh yea thanks,”Amy said to him calmly. They went to school when Amy realized something was wrong...HER DONKEY

    “DERIK DERIK I CAN'T FIND MONIKA” Amy yelled almost crying.

    Greatn job, Soleil

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  3. good job on week 25 you did good
    logan gates

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  5. I like your week 25. I like how the statue saved him from a zombie apocalypse🧟‍♀️. - JACKIE! 😎

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  6. I really like your week 25!
    I love how you used so many details, and the zombie invasion is pretty fun!
    Great job! ~Alba

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  7. I love you story's! Keep writing

    -Emma.Turano C-3

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  8. I think your story is sooooooo awesome that I told my classmates that I think they should read it.

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  9. Hi Ella! I loved your week 26! It was great! I love how you said "“Omg a...LIZARD yes!!’ Amy shouted. Amy loves lizards. She took the lizard to her room." Great job!!!
    ~Soleil

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  10. week 26 was great 10/10
    logan gates

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  11. I like the zombie apocalypse setting in week 25!

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  12. I love the surprise in your week 28! it was hilarious that she got scared from the "DING DONG"! I think you should have paragraphed and indented more often besides that it was good! 👍🏻

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  13. I liked your week 28, I liked the part when you did liked a surprise, in your story. Great work!!
    Natalia ortiz

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  14. I like your week 29!
    It was fun to read, and I love how you put lots of details it really helped me invision what you wrote!

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  15. Morgan (Team 100)May 4, 2021 at 5:12 PM

    Hi Eriella, a very descriptive story this week! You are so good at telling us all about the setting, and really using the prompt in an interesting way. You also clearly have a great understanding of how to use speech marks etc, so very well done. Thanks for letting me read your story, and have a great week!

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