EmmaB

Week 6 (21)


It was three days before my birthday, and my aunt already sent her a present for me. My mom opened it without me looking, then she said to bring it up to my room and not to open it yet.

So I brought it up, stared and set it down on the floor. I know she told me not to open it but I had to see what was inside. I told myself no but I thought just a small peak, and so I looked in, saw something rainbow and then dashed back down the stairs like everything was fine.

Week 5(21)
“Do you like cannons?” Asked Lizzie as we where walking home. I answered “Not really I mean they were used for war wich is pretty violent and violence is never good” I was definitely not prepared for that question and was supplies again for what she said next “Couldn't you use canos for something else?” I thought about that for a moment, and then finally said “You could put glitter in one and shout it out the end.” After she said “Ya so they could be used for something other than violence, like shouting glitter.” “Ya.” I agreed. “They can.”

Week 4(21)


I walked out the door. My brother was playing his violin and I found it quite annoying right then, so I decided to climb my tree in our front yard. When I stated to walk I tripped and bruised my elbow, down there I saw a green prickly leaf, it was odd but I got to the tree and climbed to my favorite branch to sit on. I sat there for a while. Then a couple just walked by. They did not notice me, but when I got back to my house I wondered why no one ever looked up.

Week 3(21)
They never should have said yes. It was bad not that bad, but still bad. So I asked my mom if we could bring our dog to my brother's soccer game and I was not prepared for the answer. I thought she would say no, but she said yes so. We went to my brother's soccer game with are dog and it was great at first and then he saw all the people that were there , and started to bark. He was the loudest dog on earth. He is so, so friendly but so loud. Everyone was looking at us.


Practice Week

I know how he got stuck in the hay. I watched the whole thing happen. I was outside with my dog, we were playing with a ball, and then we saw him come up the road and on to the grass. Suddenly Buch my dog was not interested in the ball anymore. He moved and lay down.The bike was heading right for him! Then the bike came to a frighting stop everything flipped over and he flew into the hay! I had to pule him out of the hay and say “I am so sorry for my dog sir”.

7 comments:

  1. I love how you jumped right in to the story!
    ~Amina A

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  2. i like how you added more characters to the scene like the dog ari.s

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  3. I really liked your story but i think you misspelled pule there is no E only 2 L´s and i liked how you made you had the point of view it was a funny story Great job!! - Alba Hila

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  4. I like the start with the dog Joey Aloy

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  5. I liked how you jumped right into the story


    Soleil Dupuis

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  6. Hi Emma,
    Well done on your story.
    I think it is quite realistic to be annoyed by a brother or sister playing their musical instrument! I can also imagine being doubly annoyed by falling over and getting bruised.
    I loved how at the end you thought about how people don't tend to look up when they walk around. It's very true. I wonder how much we miss?
    Thank you for sharing,
    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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  7. I like how you are so creative by wanting to put other things in a cannon like glitter.
    logan gates ges at fms

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