Elliott

Week 36 (21)

“Hey mom, are we going to Tinka park today or tomorrow?”

“Today after school honey”

“Ok, sounds good!” It is the middle of lunch and all I can think about is park, park, park, park ,park! Next thing I know we're on the buses and everyone is talking about the upcoming field trip, but I don’t really care about it at the moment because Tinka park!

“Ok, are you ready to leave mom?”

“Yep, just one second.” 15 minutes later....

“Ok we’re here!”

“Mom, look at that cool statue, who is it?”

“ I don't know?”

“Hmm it says Dave Peter…”

Week 35 (21)To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.

It was a hot summer day, the birds were chirping, and the bees were buzzing. I was playing street hockey with some of my friends from school. It was the last period with 10 seconds on the clock my team was down by 1. 

My sweat was pouring down my chin like the rainy days where I wish I was out playing hockey with my team. Then out of nowhere WHOOSH! I was in the past!? Somehow…

“Which way to the shops?” it panted.

“Uh, take a left.” What was that thing and how am I in the past? WHOOSH!


Week 31 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.


“Who are you?”


“No one… I am going to teleport you” he said with a wistful smile


“You’re going to wha-”  Woosh 


“Where am I? Why are there so many mushrooms?”


“There is only one rule, you have to use oars to get back.”


“And where would I find oars?”


“In the river when the clock hits nine! No later, no sooner.”


“Why is the sky pink and fluffy like the cotton candy I get when I go to a Reds game with my dad and why are the mushrooms so wrinkled like my bed sheets when I wake up?”


Week 30 (21)

“Come on!” Yelled my brother from the basement. 

“I’m scared though bubby!” 

“Come on, it won't be that bad!”

“Mom said if you make me go down there then you have to buy me an ice cream cone!” 

“Fine! I will buy you an ice cream cone if you come in the basement.”

“Can I leave the door open?”

“Sure,” my brother said with an annoyed look on his face. As I creek open the door for some light. Suddenly, darkness enveloped the room.

“What, I just opened the door?!” 

“Hi!” A mysterious voice said from the top of the stairs!


Week 29 (21)

The red fence with the house number twenty-nine, people would sit on the old green mossy rock and look up at the sky.

Nobody knew why the cat ran away. Maybe he didn’t like the day or he chased a mouse nobody knew.

The cat was usually there everyday, the house was very old. There was still an old lady that lives there to this day!

She moved in the house in 1998 and has never made it look nice. The house has so many bushes you could barely see the house. It was like a forest.

Trees and bees...


Week 28 (21)

Hi! If you are new here you probably do not know who I am. I am Elliott, a babysitter and I am trying to find some babies to sit… Anyways, I have recently just babysat the WORST BABY IMAGINABLE, and when I say worst I mean WORST! The baby wouldn’t even eat the applesauce I gave her even though it was “Mrs. Choo Choo Train!” The baby was sweet until I wouldn’t give it a… COOKIE! As it let out a pitiful howl I covered my ears and said to myself, it is okay! I will just split… the… cookie?!

Week 27 (21)

On Friday, my friend Landon got a brand new Violin for his birthday. Landon was so happy he couldn’t believe he had actually gotten a violin! Another one of his presents was that he was getting his room painted purple! Because he really likes the color purple. But those weren’t his only gifts, because they weren’t that expensive! And last but not least Landon got a… ELEPHANT! So over break we decided to facetime and he showed me all of his awesome new gifts! I was so shocked that he got all those presents and he got a real elephant...

GES ONLY week

Our tall, bright red ladder was sinking into the ground faster every minute. I didn’t know what to do, know one else knew what to do either. So we just watched our tall, bright red ladder sink farther and farther into the dirt. 

All I could think about was how much I liked that ladder. 

I know it sounds weird, but I loved how bright it was, and how soft it was at the touch. It was helpful when we needed to put up decorations for holidays, and I have never had any other ladder. Yes I know it’s weird. 


Week 25 (21)


“Hi I am Sam!”


“Did you hear that Mom?!? Says Brad.


“Hear What?” 


“Sigh” “Nevermind…”


“OVER HERE! The one in the picture, you know silver, tall, and near flowers.


“Wait.. Wait.. Are you the-”


“YES I am the statue!


“Oh my gosh I am talking TO A STATUE!?! Like WHAT!!”


“Shh… Shh… Don’t tell anyone! You need to believe me.”


“Believe What??”


I couldn’t believe I was talking to a statue. I just have to calm down.


“Ok so you got to go to the flowers then pull one out then scream!”


“Ok! I did it then..?”


“SCREAM!”


“Ok, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!”



Week 24 (21) This story is a continuation of the week 23 story.  To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.




“Sure,” I said hoping it would be cool. 

“I am going to give you mind control and make you dream!” Mr.Brown said. 

“Ok....”

“Look at my watch… calm your body down...let yourself rest…”

“SLEEP!” The clown yelled as I fell asleep…

“Woah!” I screamed waking up in this winter wonderland thing?!

“Wha- What are you? Who are you?”

“We are the troooooolls!” The “Troll” said. The orange one spoke first, the green, and then the yellow…

“Hi my name is Overtaught orange I know everything known to troll kind! Wanna see our village?”

“Sure!” I said. No regrets...


 

Week 23 (21)

 

Today my family and I went to a circus. When we went there I met someone named Mr.Brown the clown. It was so frightening, seeing him and that little red balloon of his. I never wanted to see that weirdo again in my life! Then Mr. Brown the clown said…

“Want to see a trick?”

“Definitely!” I said in panic now wanting to kick the dirt. And I did, I kicked the dirt so hard it blew in the clown’s face! He said,

“Phhhh spitting out the dirt.”

“Can I help?”

“No but want to see the trick still..?”


Week 22 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.

Exactly a year from today a girl named Sabrina lost it... Now, you are all probably like.

“Wha- What did she lose?” She lost her dog! She woke up on a freezing day in December. Wondering where it could have gone?! So, Sabrina went to look for her dog. Then 2 HOURS later she found her dog! But then she met this crazy guy that took her into the past?! So she was confused. Very confused. She saw herself talking to her mom about her dog, saying

“but where did it go?” She shouted!! She was back in real life...

Welcome to GES at FMS!  Your first 100 WC will be WEEK 19.

Week 20 (21)



     “NO!” I screamed as my yellow bike drifted off into the distance. I couldn’t believe that had just happened! “Mom, I need a new bike.” I said, my eyes almost watering up.

“But me and your father just got you that yellow bike a month ago?” She whispered in confusion, knowing my Dad would hear from the other room. 

Grounding me for not keeping track of my stuff. “I know” I whispered back, my throat shaking. 

“Let’s go look for it, ok?” Mom asked.

”Ok.” I reapplied. We were walking down the block. And… there it was! “My yellow bike!”


Week 19 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of the page.

     In Minecraft I was making a rocket ship! When it just wouldn’t take off. So I tried many different ways! But every way still wouldn’t work? Then I tried to add slime blocks but… Here! I'll try to guess. Yes, It didn’t work. I didn’t know what to do? I found the special ingredient! 


    Pistons it might seem weird but yes pistons! If You don’t know what pistons are basically. They are a device in MineCraft that can push blocks forward. Or if it is a sticky piston it can push and pull blocks! So finally I built the ship!


48 comments:

  1. I loved your story!!! And i got it case i play Minecraft!!! I love the part where it said " When it just wouldn’t take off. So I tried many different ways! But every way still wouldn’t work?" It was funny case i had that happen to me the first year i started playing!!!! Keep up the great work!!! Bye!!!
    ~Soleil

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  2. Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  3. dude you did great first time and your awsome
    logan gates

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  4. Elliott Elliott Elliott good story for your first time keep it up

    mason

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  5. Elliott,
    I like how you included Minecraft into your story. I think that it represents you! Great first 100WC.
    Keep up the awesome writing.

    -Gemma Sela,

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  6. Elliot I loved your story I can never build a flying machine it never works. I loved that you decided to place it in the world of minecraft. You did amazing on your first story. I can't wait to read your next one. Keep writing. CROSBY

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  7. I liked your story alot and also how you menshend mincraft in a vary craftey way


    Garrett Doyon


    GOOD JOD

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  8. I like your creativity. Did this happen in real life?

    -Jennavieve

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  9. I liked week 20 it had drama in it (I like drama story`s)
    logan gates

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  10. I like how in week 19 that you did it as minecraft but you said you had the rocketship ready but it just wouldn't fly so at the end why did you say I finally built the ship and it wasn't a ship it was a rocketship. mason

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  11. I like your week 20 because you said he will ground me for not keeping track of my stuff good job. mason

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  12. Elliot,
    I really like your week 20 story, at the end it makes me want to know more and what happens next!
    Keep up the awesome writing.
    -Gemma Sela,

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  13. I liked your story for week 20. It was filled with drama :)
    -Ella

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  14. I really like that you had ot's of dialog,(that's my favorite type of writing). Also that you had lots of characters.

    -Morgan Ryan

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  15. Hi Elliot,
    I really liked your week 20 in the 100 word challenge. It was very well described and I would have been sad if my bike disappeared, and happy when I found it. I really liked the line when you said "Grounding me for not keeping track of my stuff. “I know” I whispered back, my throat shaking." That was a very cool line.
    Great job!
    ~Lizzie :D

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  16. Hi Elliot,
    I really liked your week 23 story. I like how the clown still wanted to do his trick after you kicked dirt in his face. I can't wait to see week 24. Keep writing. Crosby :-)

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  17. Hi Elliott,
    Your week 24 was amazing, I liked how most of the story was dialogue. I can't wait for week 25. Keep writing. Crosby (:

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  18. Hello Elliott,

    A sequel to Week #23? Great start. I had to read Week #23 before starting Week #24.

    Your sequel was a great continuation. It caught my interest both by how well it was written and how well it continued an adventure at a circus while successfully using the prompt words. Well done.

    I suspect other sequels are on the way. Your Week #24 was left open to share the adventure in the troll village. It can be amazing what we can be made to believe when in a highly suggestive state as in hypnosis.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  19. week 24 was great 10/10
    logan gates

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  20. I like week 22 because the bag guy takes the girl into the past imagine if we could go to the past. great job Luki😃

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  21. Elliot I in week 24 I like that you added trolls to your story. Great job Luki 😬😈

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  22. week 24 was really good and i liked the trolls
    good job!

    Mir

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  23. Hi Elliott I liked your week 25 story. I love how they had to pull a flower then scream! Keep writing. Crosby

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  24. Hi Elliot I really liked your week 25 great job.
    Luki🤜🤛 👍😈😈

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  25. Hello Elliot,
    Great job on week 20 I still think the bike should have said scert scert.
    Luki👍😈😈

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  26. Hi Elliot! Amazing story! I could also not belive that you were talking to a statue! But amazing creativity! Keep it up! ~Suhaani

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  27. Elliot i love all of your l00 word challenge keep writing

    From: jacob Roberts

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  28. Dear Elliott,
    I really liked your "GES ONLY" week great job.
    Luki 😈😃

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  29. week 26 was good 10/10
    logan gates

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  30. Hi Elliott,
    I really think your week 26 100 WC is super creative, and it has a lot of detail. My favorite part was when you said "I know it sounds weird, but I loved how bright it was, and how soft it was at the touch. It was helpful when we needed to put up decorations for holidays, and I have never had any other ladder. Yes I know it’s weird." That made me feel what you felt about the ladder because you explained it well. Nice job!
    ~Lizzie

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  31. Hi Elliot,
    I really liked your week 28 and how it was funny that you said "trying to find some babies to sit." Keep writing. Crosby :)

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  32. week 28 was great it made me laugh a little
    logan

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  33. Hello, I liked your week 29! I liked how there was a cat but it ran away.
    Ella C4

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  34. Hi Elliott
    I liked your week 29 and how you incorporated the prompt, I felt like I was in the story. Keep writing. Crosby :)

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  35. week 29 was cool good job
    logan

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  36. Morgan (Team 100)May 4, 2021 at 5:41 PM

    Hiya Elliott, a very interesting story this week. You were really good at conveying a mysterious tone. You use really good descriptive words, and set the scene well. I wonder if you will continue this story? Thanks for letting me read it, and have a great week!

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  37. Hi Elliott,
    I liked your week 30 because there was a lot of dialogue. Keep writing. Crosby:)

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  38. Hi Elliott,
    I liked your week 31 because you used similes like "wrinkled like my bed sheets when I wake up." You did a good job. Keep writing. Crosby :)

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  39. I liked how you said in week 31 why are the mushrooms as wrinkled as my bed sheets when I wake up
    logan

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  40. I really like the way your whole story is consists of two peoples talking to each other, Elliott. It is so easy to read and really comes alive. I can just hear them talking to each other. You have fitted the prompt words in very well too. I also like your description of the sky as pink and fluffy like cotton candy.

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  41. I like that you got teleport teleported to some random place in your week 31. mason

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  42. Hi Elliott,
    I liked your week 31 and how it is mostly dialogue I like how you are using people talking to tell the story instead of a 3rd person view. I really want to see more stories like this. Hopefully this continued.

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  43. Week 31 was a very interesting mystery.

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  44. Dear Elliott, week 30 at the end was a big cliffhanger.Luki👍😃😈

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  45. I think week 31 is funny with the "your gonna wha-".
    -Morgan C-3

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  46. Hi Elliott,
    Your week 35 was amazing and how you used street hockey and how you went into the past. Keep writing. Crosby :)

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  47. Dear Elliott, I really liked how you in week 35 you went into the past I wonder what it was aliens? Great job. Luki 👍😃😈

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