Connor

GES ONLY week
One day Jarvis finally won a fortnite game. It was a monumental day for the red concrete block heads. Where their weirdest person finally won. There was a whole parade with a whopping 14 ladders and 0 people. A huge parade for a 3 foot 2 man. (Nothing against small people .) They had to move the rungs on the ladders so he could get up them. When he was all the way up jarvis fell 3 times his height and pushed a penny into the concrete with his head. SAD DAY FOR THE RED CONCRETE BLOCK HEADS TODAY AT NOON 


Week 24 (21)


It was the night before christmas and all through the house not a creature was stirring not even a mou- Shake, Shake shake. “Wake up guys. Come on! said the ornament. We should sneak around and set pranks for when they wake up!”The orange one spoke first, “I do believe that we should be sleeping and waiting not awake and moving!” The yellow one spoke. “Hey I have something to say. “What” said orange. “Were out of words!” Shouted yellow.



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Brown filled the once clear sky
A balloon rises in itś dark air
The blue sky gone, perished just as it left in the evening
I kicked the dirt knowing that this is what it looked like 
My life, brown, fading, lost, just like the sky
The frightening thought pieced my mind. 
I fell to the ground, I laid down hoping it would just all go away
But it didn´t never did the brown sky fade, it just stayed
Then I remembered the balloon. It didn't fall to the ground
It kept rising, rising up against the sky to rebell 


Week 22 (21)
“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…


“Hey Jack! You know that house on Vanderbilt?” “Yeah. I said back. What about it?” You want to explore it with me?” “What! No! That place is so creepy i would never go explore it!”

37 Minutes later


“And were here.” “Will! Why did you drag me all the way here?!” “Because.” So we went into the house and left our backpacks near the front door and went upstairs. We went upstairs and there was nothing there so we went back downstairs. We went downstairs and saw our backpacks were gone.

What?!

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The Hitchhiker 


In 1981 a man was riding his bike along a highway. He saw a person walking ahead. He caught up to her and asked her if she wanted a ride. The woman nodded but said nothing. The man realized that this woman looked no older than 17. The man asked the woman were to go and the woman pulled out a map and pointed. The man rode along the highway but when he looked behind him the woman was gone. Confused he pulled into a gas station and turned to see the woman hitchhiking back where she started. 




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Yellow leaves flew in the wind.

Desperate children dancing after

A bicycle bell chimed in the air and then the sound fell to despair  

Greedily wanting to see the end searching out from every bend

Even now I seize the day, that one in the middle of may

Searching for him in the bay 

Now this is my place, the brim of life were I was not bothered by other folks strife

I warned him not to go but even though he went

He left then to see the day of glory and despair  

But now I must pass on 


Week 16 
I woke up, falling. Looking down into endless darkness. I was still in my bed. But my bed was just. Falling. Suddenly everything stopped and I could feel that I wasn’t falling anymore . I was just stuck in the middle of space, it seemed. I got out of bed and stepped out into the darkness. Nothing. I was just trapped in the middle of time. I looked behind me and saw earth. Not moving at all. I sat and waited. Nothing. I was stuck in time. I'd be trapped here forever. Never growing older, but ageing slowly. Suddenly I woke.

Week 13 (21)
It was a spy mission. I was breaking into the spanish military base. We could not be caught or else I’d  be killed. It was a risky mission, but I had to do it for the sake of America. I had to get  in, steal the missile codes, and get out. Easy. Except for the hundreds of guards, and missile proof steel walls. I began. I got into the base, went into the General's tent and got out of there, like I said, Easy. I looked  at the codes and saw a bomb, I didn’t remember putting it on...

Week 11(21)

James was on the beach in Cancun Mexico he was there for christmas break. James was making a sand castle. “You're really crafty!” said his younger brother Max. “Thank you.” James said back. 
When James finished his castle he laid back and watched the rolling waves come into the shore. Before long James fell asleep he thought about his home back in Vermont. He thought of the trees without any leaves. He thought about the white fluffy snow that would be covering the ground. He thought about the warm hot chocolate his mother made. Then, he woke back in Mexico.


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“Ahhhhhhh! Giant bee!” someone yelled. “We must take it down!” yelled another. Darren went inside to take cover, from the bee. Then he heard gunshots, arrows, and cannons, and went off. Darren knew they were only to the bee but the sound hurt his ears so he went even further inside his house.


When the fighting had stopped Darren went outside to see the giant bee on the stone hard ground laying still. Then he noticed two men with their hazmat suits on and their gear and went over to the bee. “It is finally dead!” “Yay!” Everyone yelled happily.


Week 8 (21)



¨Lookout!¨ I yell. As another cannonball whipped by. We were in the middle of a battle and the enemy army had infiltrated the base and me and my brother were in a sword battle with an enemy. ¨NO!¨ I yell as my brother gets pinned down. I let my guard down and the enemy knocked my sword out of my hand. I scramble across the castle floor to doge an attack I manage to go around in a circle to get back to my brother. I see my brother exhausted and breathing hard, he simply raised his fists.

Week 7 (21)

It was a snow day in Springfield Massachusetts. So me and my brother came up with some dumb stuff to do on our day off. I came up with the Idea to ride our scooter down the sidewalk in the snow. So I started down the concrete sidewalk and as it sloped down I watched as the white fluffy snowflakes Danced in the air. I was going super fast and the brake on the scooter was too wet and slippery to step on. So I decided to jump off the scooter into a tall snowbank right before a red sign.

Week 6 (21)

I was finally done unpacking all my clothes into my closet at my new house. I was so exhausted that I had to lay down. But when I layed done a door fell into the closet. I could smell the dark musty air coming from inside the room.I had a gt feeling not to go in, but I had to see what was inside the secret room. I went inside and saw a desk with a chest ontop. It was very creepy so I left the room forever.

Week 5 (21)
Let me tell you a story about Captain Sam. Once he and his crew had set sail. And about half way through their journey THEY WERE UNDER ATTACK. Fire up the cannons yelled captain sam but they couldn't fire enough shots off to take the other boat down with them, the other boat had gotten too many shots off before they could fire. Aboard Captain Sams ship was lots and lots of gold. That gold aboard his ship has still not been found to this day. People have given up but I do still believe that it's out there, somewhere.

Week 4(21)

One day Jack was going on a bike ride when something caught his eye, something green. So he stopped and went to go check it out and when he got closer he realised it was a violin. A green prickly bruised violin. Jack had really wanted to play the violin but his parents didn't have the money to get one. So Jack decided to walk his bike and the violin back to his house. At home he fixed it into a brand new violin and Jack walked it over to his parents to show them his all fixed up violin.

Week 3(21)




One day Joey was over at his friend Andrews house. They were playing in the basement when Andrew's little brother asked them if they wanted to ride bikes. So they decided to say yes. They were riding their bikes down the street when Andrew started to go really fast so Joey followed. T Then they both hit a pothole and they both fell off their bikes and scraped their knee. So they had to go back to Andrews house. And as Joey was walking his bike back to Andrews house he thought to himself, they never should have said yes.
Practice Week



One day a group of friends was riding bikes and when they turned a corner they saw a guy's legs sticking out of a hay bail. So they went to go check it out then they saw his bike in front of the hay bail with a crate of pumpkins and apples that had been spilled. And then one of the kids said “hey guys he’s looking for the needle in the hay bail”. So then they pulled the guy out of the hay bail and he had a needle in his hand! “Hey it was just a joke guys!”

27 comments:

  1. I thought it was good i think you did a good job on it

    From Natalia

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  2. Great job Connor it was very funny!Crosby

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  3. i like how they came up to guy in the hay bale and thought he was looking for a needle when he was ari.s

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  4. I liked your story. I liked how you incorporated the pun 'like finding a needle in a hay bale! - Jackie

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  5. ha funny story con great story and keep up the amazing writing

    Kiernan Wendling

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  6. I can't imagine riding a scooter on the sidewalk and there being snow! Great job Connor keep writing. Crosby

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  7. I like how you put in your story in the winter time because you described it really well! Nice job! ~Lizzie

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  8. To Connor, I like how you use words like ‘infiltrated’ and ‘scramble’. The stories are very interesting and good to read. Here is the link to our class blog so you can visit it sometime if you would like too : https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/ . From Kyle

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  9. Hi Connor,
    Well done on your story this week. You have done a good job with the prompt picture. I felt a bit sad for the dead bee!
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin

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  10. i think your week 13 was cool because of how it was a military base and your use of the words you had to use
    -ari

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  11. i like how you were a spy on week 13 very creative
    logan gates ges at fms

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  12. I like week 13 and how you made it like james bond, very crafty

    Jake Avery

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  13. Good job on your week 13!!!!!! I like how you said "Easy. Except for the hundreds of guards, and missile proof steel walls." It showed how it was inpossible but he still wanted to try!!!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ~SOLEIL

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  14. I really liked the details in the story
    Lily

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  15. I like how you real made it feel like a spy movie

    -Jayden

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  16. Connor, using the form of a poem in week 18 is very original! It must have been very difficult managing to include all of the words from the week's prompt and make them rhyme, so well done! The emotion that comes through in the poem is very strong.
    Isabel, Team 100 w/c

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  17. Wow! The week 18 one was... amazing! I like poetry very much. I like how you made all of the prompt words seem connected, even when they started out lookinglike just a bunch of words all mixed up!

    ~Cara C.

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  18. The week 18 story was very amazing! I like how you did poetry and you rhymed some of the words. I also liked how you used the prompt! Amazing job!
    ~Lizzie Lamme :D

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  19. Connor,
    your week 18 100WC was amazing. I really liked how everything rhymes and how it seems so calm

    Anthony

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  20. Connor,
    I really liked your week 16 piece. It was very cool to think about being in space and ageing really slow. Your story was very detailed. I really liked the part where it said " I was still in my bed. But my bed was just. Falling." That was a cool part in your story
    Keep up the good work!
    ~Lizzie Lamme

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  21. I liked your week 22, I thought it was kinda funny when you said you weren't going to the house on Vanderbilt, then you were their. Natalia

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  22. I liked your week 23 story. I had a picture in my mind of the story. Keep writing. Crosby

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  23. I like your week 23 story, I had a similar approach with the poem, great work

    ~Jake Avery~

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  24. Connor! My man! I just wanted to say that your week 23 story wanted to make me cry... cuz it was amazing! I like how made everything so serious and depressing. Nice job! But if you did not make it sound depressing, well, its your fault not mine! *runs away from computer and starts too cry because it was depressing and great*

    Your friend, Asher =)

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  25. I loved your week 24 story because it had the start of a night before christmas and I love that movie.
    Jake

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  26. I like your week 24 a lot because you made the ortamants talk!

    -Dominic

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  27. I liked your Week 24 because the yellow ornament knows they're in a story and doesn't want to go over the limit. - JACKIE! 😎

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