Week 6 (21)

“What is that box?”I asked.My dad said “It is a lesson. Don't open this box”. I was curious. I took it, shook it and held it to my ear. Dad doesn't want me to open it,but I had to see what was inside. I slowly opened the box. Suddenly two flies flew out of the box. I was scared. My father will surely punish me. I heard my parents coming. My dad saw the box and smiled. “I told you it is a lesson”, he said “Don’t let curiosity get to you.” I had learned my lesson.
Week 5 (21)

“ATTACK,” said Captain Brian.


His crew said “but we have no AMMO!!!!!”

“What???” said captain Brian.

Captain Brian remembered that his mother and his father had said that he was a very smart guy. He was a soldier too. He will not go down without a fight. He had to think some awesome plan fast. Suddenly, he had an idea. “Quick, get as many big, round and large stones as you can find”. The soldiers brought a lot of stones. Captain Brian put the big stones in the cannon and fired it at the enemies. He won!!!!!!
Week 4 (21)

Brian was walking down the street when he heard a man playing violin. Brian loved the violin. He started walking to the sound. He walked and walked. Something pricked his hand. He saw a prickly little cactus. It had bruised him. He saw green trees all around him. He walked and he reached the man playing the violin. Brian was very happy. Brian begged the man to teach him. The man said “I will teach you kid.” Brian was very happy. Brian asks what your name is. He said “my name is Amet ”. Let's start learning violin. Okay let’s go.
Week 3

“Can I go outside to play and to ride my bike?” David asked.

His dad said “Yes.”

Dave went to play. He reached a hill. His Parents said “Do not go down the hill”. Dave was jealous because his friends had ridden their bikes down the hill. He rode his bike fast down the hill for the first time. Dave lost control. Dave fell down and broke his legs! Dave thinks they never should have said yes. Someone Herd Dave falling and scming. They helped him and took him to his parents. His parents then took him to the hospital.

Practice Week

Jake woke up in the morning and the sun was on his face. The birds were singing so he woke up and went to buy a pumpkin. He took his bike and went to the store. He bought a pumpkin and some apples. He remembered that his father had said not to ride the bike very fast. Jake loved adventure. He rode his bike fast and fast like his friends do. Suddenly, a dog came from nowhere. He tried to save the dog by turning his bike to the side. He lost control of his bike and found himself flying to a nearby field. He remembers seeing a roll of hay. When he woke up, he realized his head was in the roll of hay. He could not free himself. Suddenly, someone was pulling his legs. It took people ten minutes to free him from the hay roll. His pumpkin was in pieces and the apples were scattered. He returned home with no fruits and a broken bike. His father was waiting for him. Jake was scared. News had reached his father. When he reached home, his father was waiting with band-aids. His father had forgiven him. He cried and promised never to ride the bike fast anymore. Jake had learned his lesson.


  1. Good Brian I like how you detailed the story

  2. its very good and detailed story but you went way over the challenge amount so dont add as much small detail next time

    from ari schumann

  3. good how you made the beginning

    from brian l

  4. i like how you put details in it was really good keep writing brian