BrianL

Week 10 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.




My friends and I are playing with a ball outside in my backyard.  When I kicked the ball too hard it flew up in the air and the ball went down really fast and got stuck in a small hole.  I got my dog to get it but my dog was too big to fit in that small hole.  If only it was a bit smaller.   Then my friend said “here use this shovel to dig up the ball.”  Then I dug the hole bigger and the ball was dirty so we washed it and dried it then kept playing.  


Week 9 (21)
I see two small people and a huge bee.   One person touches the bee to see if it is dead or not and the other person is ready to vacuum the beeswing just in case if it flies away.              They got a lot of bags in the two boxes so maybe they are going to bring the bee home or somewhere to see what is inside that bee or how many honey do it make or is it poisonous or maybe they are going to take pictures of the bee and let everyone know that there is a huge bee.  

Week 8 (21) To comment, SCROLL ALL THE WAY TO THE BOTTOM of this page.


Ms. Aperance like the race and want to enter the race. She was excited to see the race. So after Ms. Aperance went home and she got all the rest and all the energy that she needs to start the race. Tomorrow morning when she wakes up she got ready and went to the race right away so when Ms. Aperance got there the race started Ms. Aperance runs as fast as it can to beat the other player. After the race Ms. Aperance was exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists world record and she went home happy.

Week 7 (21)


It was a nice day and My friend invited me to the dance party. So i say “ok i'm on my way there”. So when I was on my way there I saw 3 people walking with a fluffy dog and 2 kids on the scooter. I saw a shortcut so I took the shortcut but I saw the road is built with Concrete. The red car in front of me is not going but its green light so I beep and the car starts going. At the dance party I danced until 12 am. It was the best day.

Week 6 (21)
One time my friend brought a box over to my house. My friend says I bought this box on the dark web. It cost me 500$ to buy and my friend brought some friends over. And we all try to open it but it was taped to hard so we cant open it but i had to see what was inside my friends give up but I didn't give up I say let go to the store and buy something sharp to open it so me and my friends go to the store we buy a axe,sawmill,drill,and a lots of needles to open it.After the shop we went back to my house and we tried to open it again. We tried to open it for hours and it finally opened. We saw a lot of things that shouldn't be in it. There was a fish that glowed in the dark. I ever seen a fish that can glow in the dark. I was like let's see what is in there more. Then we found a knife,a dog but it's dirty,and potion there was orange water inside and we didn't want to see any more scary stuff anymore so we threw it in the trash can and my friends all went home.

Week 4(21)


My friends walked down the road. Then one ball came flying out and bruised my friend's eye. Then we keep walking… Then I stepped on something prickly. It was a cactus then I was like “bruh good thing my shoe was hard enough to only hurt me a little”. So we just kept walking. My friend saw a violin so my friend said “can I play it” and my other friend was like “ok ok fine”. After the play we walked to a restaurant and we haved green beans and a stake after the meal. We all went back home.

Week 3(21)

they never should have said yes



I was lost in the dark woods for 10 days. I was so hungry then I saw someone. I Walked up and said “can I have some food?” She said “Yes.” She never should have said yes. Then she said “Come in.” Inside her house everything was meat,candy,ice cream, I ate everything she said “Stop eating.” I didn't care and just kept eating. 2 hours later I finished. She was mad and kicked me up in the air. After 10 mins I finally got down then I looked back and I saw the woods. Then I walked home.

2 comments:

  1. I like all of the detail you put in to your story! ~Lizzie

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  2. Kia ora Brian. I'm commenting on Week 8's 100 Word Challenge. Well done, I really enjoyed reading it. I especially like your thoughts about getting all the 'rest and energy she needed to start the race'. Definitely a good idea if you're hoping to break world records! Great story Brian - keep rising to the 100WC!
    Heidi (Team 100WC, New Zealand)

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