BrianJ

Week 15 (21) To comment, scroll to the bottom of this page.

The world has been so different, but now I have the hope that it can change.

To right those wrongs to make things right.

To stop the pandemic that is here.

Keep away and wear your mask.

So be safe till the vaccine’s here.

You know what’s best.

For you to do.

The world needs to be conscious during times.


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Week 13 (21)
I didn’t remember putting it on I really didn't but now it is on.

I guess that's a good thing the bee can’t possibly get to me underwater thought sam.

E.S.V. (Expandable submersive vehicle) Transmission : Sam I’m coming toward you and once I’m there get ready to swim on kay?

Reply : sure but what are we going to do after this.

E.S.V. Transmission : Well I’m sure the writer will come up with some grand adventure for us.

Suddenly poof Sam and Jake turned into dainty little cute dolls.

Sigh that's not what I----

Week 11 (21)
The white castle was the crafty one he liked to roll in leaves and use them for his projects.

Then one day as we played a game of chess the black castle set up a clever trap with leaves.

Suddenly a hand came from above and swiped away the leaves revealing who but the black queen herself.

Then we heard the voice “you know that’s not how you play chess.”

Aww fine you got me okay let’s play chess then.

Then the real game starts. Every day at least 1 game is played and we are always used.

----White Bishop.

Week 10 (21)
“If only it was a bit smaller if only the shrinking bomb was a bit smaller we wouldn’t “bee” whoops I meant be attacked by the bee that seems so giant to us because you activated the bomb and shrank both of us.” complained sam.

(Oh by the way you might understand the story better if you read my week 9)

“Um sam, you might want to stop “bee”ing so sarcastic and help me fight the bee that’s coming after us!”

“Oh okay how about we see if anything in the plastic toy box will help us.” sam replied.

Week 9 (21)
“Oh Sam don’t “bee” mad.” said Jake.

“Nice words coming from the person who got us into this mess.” Sam snapped back “just leave me alone.”

“Okay I’ll “buzz” off and mind my own “beeswax”.” Jake Joked

“And STOP with those bee puns!” Sam ordered His anger and annoyance almost exploding out like lava from an active volcano. 

“Aw you know that there’s nothing scary about bees it's not like an actual---” 

“Don't say it, you'll jinx us.” Sam said pleadingly.

However it was too late. Jake had already finished his sentence. “--An actual bee will to appear”

Suddenly Buzz.

Week 8 (21)



Exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists in cheer. Elizabith had done it, she had won the race, she had won the gold medal.


Back at the school everyone was cheering for Elizabith. And the trophy was put in the display case.


Back at home she was treated as a celebrity. Her family had a fancy dinner and she got a cake to share.


After a good night's sleep Elizabith felt refreshed and ready for the next day.


At school that day everyone had a assemblie where the superintendent congratulated her and she gave everyone a speech about success.


Week 6 (21)




If I hadn’t opened that box my whole life would have been totally normal but I had to see what was inside of it.


That magic box full of eggciting things yes eggciting, for it was full of many eggs that did everything from eggs that cook to eggs that fix. There was every single kind. At once they started to build a town and name it eggville. And it grew and grew.


One very hot day it all started to fry and everybody had eggs. After that more eggs came and it all started again and again and again.
Week 5 (21)


“Fire the cannons”


“Wait WAIT!”


“What?!”


“Wait, let's give them a chance to surrender.”


“No time to do that, they have already broken through the castle gates.”


“Oh well than fire away”


“Wait we surrender”


“Oh Ok well now go!”


“But they will try to attack again.”


“Ok than throw them into the dungeon”


“Roger that.”


“Than go now”


“Roger”


“And stop saying roger.”


“Okay.”


“Go.”


“Okay.”


“Wait, I will go help you.”


“Sure.”


“But the dungeons won’t hold them all.”


“Then kill the rest!”


“Isn’t that a bit brutal?”


“Do not question me.”


“Okay then fire the cannons now.”

Week 4(21)

A green, bruised, and prickly Violin just walked by me but it doesn't mean anything special, just an average gift even I have one, though I don’t know why. But the Rarest thing you could ever own was dirt. It costs 20 billion Bitcoins per international gram. A cactus might sell for 16 trillion Bitcoins per plant on the black market these days. My grandparents told me stories of the times where they costed nothing, they were everywhere but they tore that all down to create the futuristic world almost everyone wanted. But there are still places where they reside.

Week 3 (21)
I know they have done a lot of crazy things in the past and made a lot of crazy choices but they never should have said yes…


Yes to the thing, how could they know they would get stuck? We would get stuck in a room with paper, pens, ink and books at this point I have to say being a pen has its bonuses.


But anyways we will be stuck here forever unless some hero or other rescues us. Well there is not much hope that that is going to happen we might as well just give up now.
Practice Week

“Channel 2 news reporter Brian here”.

“Today we are at the site of an interesting case.” “A man stuck in the middle of a round hay bale.” 

“Over to you Claire.”
“Thanks --”
“Help me out of here already.”
“Cut,” “I’m going to help you out, do not worry.”
“Please stand by while our reporter helps him out.”
Brian : “Well he needs to go to the hospital,” “Now for the daily weather report.”


Add playing : “Tired of falling off your bike and spilling all your things try the basket cap 1 for the cheap price of two hundred dollars 99 cents.

11 comments:

  1. Um I didn't really understand the story but it was good.

    From Natalia

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  2. brain a have a challenge add more words i counted and its not nearly 100 other than that ist good

    from ari schumann

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  3. Make sure you 100 words Brian! I think it cool how you had characters talk
    ~Amina A

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  4. I realy like the story and how the story said please stand by
    Logan gates

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  5. Brian, I really enjoy reading your stories. I just added your blog to my bookmark.
    Shiguo

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  6. I liked the story and how you made an egg themed story, very funny! ~Lizzie

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  7. 100WC Week 8

    Dear Brian,
    I like that you wrote a story with a happy and proud athlete as the main character. Good job creating a story with a positive plan for using the prompt.

    Keep writing!

    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Silver
    Team 100
    IL, USA

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  8. Brian I really like your story’s great job, from Mya

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  9. brian you are very creative and that's something that I like about you.
    logan gates ges at fms

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  10. Hi!brian . The most part where i like of yours is that the part were . it says i hope somebody like a hero comes and saves us . i like it because just telling what i feel I think everything positive so what i think is the hero who is going to save us is our own self and God . so that is the part were i liked the most . - suzanna sara cherian

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  11. Amazing job on your week 15! It is a beautiful poem! It is also silly at the end with the fake website! It is like a poem with a website at the end so people go to the website!!!
    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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