Asher

GES ONLY WEEK
Luke Webster is a famous archaeologist! Him and his team were on their way to The Red Sea’s of Eygipt! P.s. The Red Seas of Eygipt is not a place. They were thinking about bringing their ladder and climbing the pyramids but they decided to not. So they wanted to go to the Sinking Sands of The Red Sea’s. When they got there, Luke Webster’s coins fell into the sinking sand! He had lost his coins! But then he continued his adventure! His team had found this secret room in the pavement!
TO BE CONTINUED IN THE NEXT STORY...

Week 26 (21)

Tim and his mother were going shopping at PriceChopper! They were getting ingredients for their grandma’s cake! They had eggs, flour, frosting, cake batter, and of course, SPRINKLES! But they were missing candles! So they looked all over the store! But when they were running through the store, Tim found some Marmite. “Mom, I know you think I don’t like Marmite but, No, he said, “I like Marmite” “WHAT? You like Marmite?” Said Mom. “Yes I do.” said Tim. Eventually they found the candles they needed and left! “I can’t believe you like Marmite!” said Mom. “I know, it's crazy!”


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Hello! My name is Herbert Armstrong! And my job is to be a statue! I know it sounds kind of silly, but it's true! Here’s how it works: 1. Dress up as a statue 2. Find a good spot like in a park! 3. Put a hat in front of you so that people can give you money and Stand and wait for the entire day. I stop at 8:00 PM. But one day, something crazy happened!
So basically, this guy gives $1,000! I think his name was Mr.Beast or something like that, but it was awesome!

Week 24 (21)

The crayons were going to do something no crayon had ever done before. They were going to talk to a human! “I’m not sure about this guys, what if the human doesn’t like us?” Said the pink crayon. “I’m sure the humans will like us!” Said the blue crayon. So they waited and waited until a human came to use them to draw! He picked up the orange crayon so the orange one spoke first. “Ahem!” Said the crayon. “We are alive and we would like to be friends with you!” “Ok!” Said the boy. After that, they became friends!
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So I was at my friend's birthday party and I was excited to go there because there was going to be a giant bouncy house! Once I saw the HUGE bouncy house, my whole body was filled with excitement! When we parked and got out of the car, I ran and while I was running, I accidentally  kicked a  brown balloon and it made a frightening sound! And never in my life have I kicked a brown balloon. The bouncy house was really fun and the birthday party was great! Once we went home, I wanted to go back again!

Week 22 (21)
“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…

Abigail was very excited to go to her very first olympic marathon! She was super super excited because She knew she would win if she was wearing her lucky socks and shoes. She was going upstairs to find her lucky socks and shoes but they weren’t where she put them! “Oh-no! But where did it go?” she shouted. Then her mother came upstairs and they found them and then they were on their way to the olympic marathon! She was very happy she found her lucky pair of socks and shoes. But then... Read week 8 to see what happened!

Week 20 (21)
The cookie family were driving to the airport to fly to Florida to go to Disney world! They were super excited the brother and sister had never been on a plane before! They had been packing for hours! So this trip was going to be worth it! And their grandparents were there waiting for them! But on their drive to the airport, they saw a bike strapped on to a tree! The family was super confused! But then they saw a burglur running away from a man yelling at him! The family was now super confused! And they started laughing!
Week 19 (21)

Keith was building a rocket for his school science fair project! It was about 3 feet tall and 1 foot wide. He was super excited but also scared because what if the rocket wouldn’t take off? So he tried the rocket at home before going to the science fair. And he tried when it just wouldn’t take off. He was so scared because nothing was wrong so when he was driving there, his heart was beating! When he got there, it was his turn. So when he tried… it worked! The judges were very impressed about it! And, he won!

Week 18 (21)
8 year old Timmeh was really desperate To buy the brand new yellow bicycle that was in Jimmeh’s Toy Store. It was $30 but Timmeh had none! But what he did have was a plan! He was going to steal his mother’s credit card! His mother warned him about stealing people’s credit cards but didn’t care! He went home and  greedily grabbed the credit card and ran to Jimmeh’s and bought it! But his mother noticed that he had her credit card and ran to him and sent him to jail for 5 years because of stolin credit card fraude.


Week 16 (21)

So one day I was just playing a game on my console and for some reason everything stopped and I was relly freaked by it because the power went out for everybody. I was wondering what so I asked my mom and she said that she saw a big tree fall on the power line. After that the national grid people and tree cutter people came. First, the tree people started to cut the tree in half so that one of the machines could grab it, then the national grid people fixed the wires! And everything was back to normal!


Week 14 (21)  To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of the page.
“UGH!” “Do we have to go to this abandoned house?” Said Ashley. She was with some of her friends.
“Uh, yeah! Of course we do!” Said Michael. They started to head inside,They were all freaked out by how spooky it was. They started to explore the kitchen, AND THERE WAS BLOOD! But then they found out that it was just ketchup. And then they headed up stairs and found a closet and they slowly opened it……. AND THERE WAS A SCARY DRESS! They got so scared that theyran right out the door. “WE ARE NEVER GOING THERE AGAIN EVER!”

Week 13 (21)
One time I was playing on my Xbox with my friends and then I had to leave because I had to go to my grandparents house. Once we left I was pretty excited to go. We had a lot of fun there! We ate, we laughed, and best of all, we had fun! When we were driving home, I was going to play more Xbox when I got home. When I went downstairs, the tv was left on! I didn’t remember putting it on, so I thought it was my cat that turned it on! Then I told my parents!

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Once there was a castle that was owned by Prince Caspian! The castle was big, pretty, and white! There were 100+ rooms! Bedrooms,kitchens,living rooms, play rooms, and even a room that had rooms! But one day, there was a new room! It was a room that had tons of leaves! Prince Caspian was a very crafty person so started rolling in the leaves! Everyone started to wonder,”where in the world is Princ Caspian?” They looked in every direction to find him and when they found him, they started rolling with him! Everyone was having a fun time!

Week 9 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of the page.





There were these 2 people named Bob and Ross!(pun intended) They love to go on adventures. one day they found this weird HUGE BEE! It was like 7 feet tall!

“WHY IS THERE A HUGE BEE IN FRONT OF ME?” Bob asked.

“ I don’t know, but it was probably because of the toxic slime at the power plant!” Ross said as he looked at the power plant in the distance.

“Good thing we brought science stuff!” Ross said. While they did some research on it, they saw some green goop on it that was slime from the power plant!


Week 8 (21)


It was a big day for abigail! It was the marathon! She had practiced her whole life for this! Her whole family was there to cheer her on!

“Go Abigail! her family cheered.

“On your marks, get set, GO!” BANG! The announcer shot his gun and all the racers ran! Abigail was in the lead, but then another opponent got in front! But that didn’t stop her! She ran as hard as she could! The finish line was right there! ZOOM! She had got 1st!

“WOOOOOOOO!” her family cheered. Exhausted & breathing hard, she simply raised her fists and yelled,

“YES!”
Week 7 (21)




I was so excited to ride my brand new red and black scooter! I was so excited I danced! Once I got on and started riding it, I WAS SO GOOD

“MOM LOOK! I'M GOING SO FAST MOM! WOAH AHHHHHHHH”- CRASH! I had fallen onto the concrete! “I wished that concrete was fluffy than hard brick!” I said while getting up and brushing myself off. “OH MY GOSH ARE YOU OK?” my mom asked “Yeah, I'm ok!” I replied. After that we scooted some more. Then we headed home and we also put a washcloth on my knee to heal.



Week 6 (21)

“This is super creepy grandpa!” I said

“yeah, But really, this is where I kept my old things as a kid!” Grandpa replied.” “Cool, but what's this?” as walked over to a big box. “DO NOT OPEN THAT BOX!” Grandpa said. “Ok,ok I won’t” I replied. “Let's go eat ok?” Grandpa said. “Ok!” I said. But I had to see what was inside! “It could be anything!Like money, or a secret stuffed animal!” I thought to myself. I slowly opened it and found old toys! I didn’t tell anyone and kept it to myself.After,we went home.

Week 5 (21)
Me and my family were going on a road trip to the history museum! Me and my sister were very excited because this is our first museum! “ Were here!” my dad said in a happy voice. Once we went inside I looked to my left and I saw four people at a cannon.”It looks really real!” I whispered to myself. We also saw old weapons, amour, Old clothes and other historic things! It also told us about all the things we saw which was cool! We also saw TONS of fake people. When we left, I wanted to stay!

Week 4(21)

“Remember when I walked and tripped on a violin in school?” I asked my family.

“Oh yeah! That was so funny!”My sister replied.
“It wasn't that funny” My mom also replied. 1 night later I was super excited to play HIDE AND TAG* But there’s catus’s in our backyard so yeah. Once I went outside and hid then my sister found me but then by mistake I ran into a green prickly cactus and got bruised! But my mom made me feel better!
Week 3 (21)
“They never should have said yes….. MUahahaha!” Laughed Dr cortex. He tricked Crash bandicoot and Coco to help him with his evil DEATH RAY ™. “So now what cortex?''Coco asked. Help me get crystles to help build my death ra…. I mean peace ray.”replied cortex. “ Alright crash, let's do this!” coco said in a happy voice. They had to go through many levels, hard levels, and easy levels.ALL CRYSTLES COLLECTED.”We have all the crystles here yo….. WAIT! THIS IS A DEATH RAY!” 1 fight later, “We did it again Right Crash?”Coco said “Baba!” replied Crash.


Practice Week

“Today is going to be a beautiful day for a bike ride!” I said to myself.

I said bye to my parents and hopped on to my bike and started to pedal on my bike.

At first it was a smooth ride, then it was a little bumpy. But then…… THERE WAS A GIANT TALL! I was going down so fast I couldn't control myself! “I’M GOING TO CRASH INTO A HAYBAI…..” CRASH. I crashed into a hay bail! Once I got unstuck from the hay bail, I started walking home with my bike and had dinner with my family.


28 comments:

  1. He was screaming and then the next moment he was walking home. It was great! Crosby

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  2. asher you did great I really like it and great detales

    logan ges at fms

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  3. Wow Asher I loved your story it was AWESOME :Ahmet Dagli

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  4. I loved how she raised her fists when she won the marathon great job




    Connor

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  5. I love how many detalls you had.

    Soleil Dupuis

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  6. your piece 8 was really good mostly the 1st and 3rd paragraph because it had a lot of detail

    Anthony

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  7. I like your story about Abigail! I like all of the sound affects you put in like ZOOM! and BANG! ~Lizzie

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  8. funny HUGE BEE its funny ha ha ha keep up the good work Asher
    - your 3rd grade friend Ahmet

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  9. I love your story! It was very funny! By the way im talking about the Weak 9 one!I loved all of your detalls!WHY IS THERE HUGE BEE IN FRONT OF ME!" It was sooooooooo funny!
    ~Soleil

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  10. I like how you talked about the slime factory, it was funny.

    -Dom

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  11. I like how on week 11 when everyone found prince caspian and played with him
    logan gates ges at fms

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  12. when you said Bob and Ross (pun intended)

    It made me laugh a lot. good job

    -Anthony-

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  13. Hi Asher,
    Well done on your story this week. I definitley would not go to that house again either! Daniels in my class also wrote a story about an abaondoned house. Great minds think alike.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin, Ireland

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  14. I like how you added the abandoned house in week 14

    mason

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  15. I like how in week 14 you made it very dramatic

    Jake Avery

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  16. I wonder if your cat was playing xbox asher?

    Great story

    -Connor

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  17. I like how you went in the abandoned house cool imagination Asher

    Ahmet

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  18. I like how on week 13 that your cat turned on the tv that was really funny and creative. mason

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  19. Hey Asher! I read one of your story's!!!! I loved the part that said "There were these 2 people named Bob and Ross!(pun intended)" So the first sentens...wow. I like how it said "pun intended" Idk why i find that so funny.
    Keep up the good work,
    Soleil

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  20. Hi asher I loved your 100 wc 23. like when you said you kicked a brown balloon and said you've never kicked a brown balloon before

    Anthony

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  21. good job keep writing
    ANthony

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  22. I like your week 24 story because it reminds me of a book I read a long time ago

    ~Jake Breckenridge Avery~

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  23. I love your week 23 story i love this line,Once I saw the HUGE bouncy house, my whole body was filled with excitement! Great story Asher

    ~Connor

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  24. Hi Asher,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I loved the simplicity of it.
    In Ireland, pre-covid times, we used to have street performers in the main shopping areas.
    Many a time I was convinced they were statues until one of them tapped by shoulder as I was passing!
    You can imagine the fright I got!
    Good work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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  25. I like your week 25 story because that is something mr beast does.

    ~Jake B. Avery~

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  26. Hi, Asher.
    week 25?!?!?! Great one. Mr Beast really so funny I get a kick out of it!!!! Good job and I like this part " But one day, something crazy happened!
    So basically, this guy gives $1,000! I think his name was Mr.Beast or something like that, but it was awesome!"
    Ok bye.

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  27. Wow I really liked your most recent story week 25 it was amazing
    from Henry Rivas

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  28. Hey Asher!
    Nice job putting Mr.Beast into ur 100WC! I really like it b/c Mr.Beast is really funny. c u later
    - JACKIE! 😎

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