Ari

Week 34 (21)
I was in a cave looking at gemstones when i decided to take one. All of a sudden the ground began to shake, when all of a sudden three giant golems emerged from the ground. I looked for my backup ladder and I climbed to safety. When I got out I breathed a sigh of releif but then I saw the golems. I didn’t realize Tthey could fly. They had wings and could fly! I was breathing hard but I had a idea. 
I got some dynamite and i threw it into the joints of the golems blowing them up.


Week 33 (21) To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.
I  was going around the world when I came across what seemed to be a village made from lots of stone. 
Then I saw a stone light house, however it definitely wasn’t a light house. I left what had seemed to be a stone light house, and I went on my way around the world. 
I kept thinking about the village and how strange it was, but the strange place wasn’t going to stop me from going around the world.
I finally got home and I told my family about what I saw, but especially the giant stone light house.

Week 32 (21)
I was walking through the forest with my squad and we were looking for a cave told to have a mysterious gemstone. We were getting closer to the cave when all of a sudden our flashlights started to flicker.
We had made it to the cave were we exchanged looks at each other, and we then went in. It was dark and our flashlights only barely illuminated anything because of how much they were flickering now. 
We started to walk a lot deeper into the cave when all of a sudden there was a quick flash of light, then, darkness.
Week 29 (21)To comment, scroll all the way to the bottom of this page.
I was walking down my street when I saw the abandoned house, number 29. I had looked around to make sure nobody was watching me and I swiftly headed inside. 
It was dark and extremely dusty,  and there was many plants crawling forward, and bugs flying everywhere. That’s when I noticed a creaky staircase leading to the second floor. 
Carefully I had made my way to the top and I looked around. I saw what looked like had been a bedroom with a bathroom next to it. 
I walked to the entrance to leave, when I saw the locked door.


Week 28 (21)
I was coming from the animal shelter in my car with a small cage. When I got home I opened the door and took the cage. 
I went inside and set the cage down, and I put my hand on the latch and opened it. Out came a dog wrapped in a blanket. I put some dog food down where I set the dog, and it got to eating. 
After a bit the dog started to explore, and I was watching it. After a while I went to my room to fall asleep as it let out a pitiful howl.

Week 27 (21)
It was a saturday and I was going to visit a circus. I spent about 30 minutes getting there. I was looking around and saw a tent with something strange, a elephant painted purple playing a violin. There was also a ¨Happy¨ clown with their smile. I left the tent and looked around the circus some more. In the end I got some cotton candy and I left for my car. I started the car and I left for my house. I ate the cotton candy and went to my room and soon fell asleep. (It was 11 p.m).


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I Was walking around in a small town in germany walking to go to my favorite restaurant.  
Once I made it there I walked inside, waiting to get service. I was brought to a one seat table near the side. I was sitting waiting to get served when I heard something really strange.
“No”, they said, “I like Marmite”. I thought nothing of it and waited to get served. When I did get served I finished quickly.
I started to walk back home thinking about what the person said. when I got home, It was trashed with marmite. What happened?


Week 25 (21)
It was the day, when I finally had my statue built. It was a small, but modest statue. I was there for a while. 4 or so hours. Just watching people go by. Big and small. Black and white. Afterwards I started heading back to my house.
After a 15 minute drive I made a expansion to my house, so I would have a veiw of the statue. I fell asleep after some time. I woke up to a trashed house. Things everywhere.  “Have I...” I thought to myself but I couldn’t finish my sentence before I was knocked out.


Week 24 (21) 

It was dark and I was asleep. I was having a dream about crayons that were alive when I was sleeping. The orange one spoke first. “What should we do tonight?” Then the green one responded. “Let’s go around the house looking for the dog.” The yellow one peeped up. “Great idea.” After that I woke up to a “CRACK.” “What was that?” I mumbled to myself. I rubbed my eyes and got out of my bed. I walked downstairs to to kitchen and got myself a snack. I started walking to my room when I saw a broken window.


Week 23 (21)
I was at the circus when something unusual, a brown balloon.
“Why is the ballon that color” I thought to myself. I was walking around playing games, and not minding the balloon. So I walked around, and I accidentally ran into somebody.
“Sorry.” I said. But the other person didn’t hear, or they didn’t care so they wen’t to security and told the gaurd. The guard asked the person if it was me, and they said yes. Well, afterwards I was kicked from the circus.
I started to head home, when I heard something frightening, I was never going back.

Week 22 (21)
“… ,but where did it go?” she shouted…

I was with my brother cleaning up his mess. All of a sudden my mom came in, “But where did it go?” she shouted. 
“What” I asked?
“My phone!” she responded. So I went from cleaning my brothers mess to finding my mom’s phone. Eventually we found it. Afterwards I went back to my room and got on my computer, and started to play my games. I soon got called to come downstairs, again. Once I was done downstairs I went back to my room, and fell asleep early.

Week 20 (21)

I was biking down the hill, when I see a bike zip-tied to a tree. 
¨Why is there a bike zip-tied to a tree?¨ I thought to myself. 
 I got back down to the bottom of the hill, and I went back up, to go down again. I looked for the bike but I never saw it
I went back down one more time looking for the bike, but it was gone. Then I saw some yellow paint on a tree. 
I stoped my bike to look at it. The zip-tie was still on the tree. Something, wasn´t right.

Week 19 (21)
When it just wouldn’t take off, me and my brother were disappointed. We were trying to get a rocket to go into the air. 
We were walking away when I heard a ¨POP¨. I looked back and I saw the bottle shaking. 
I tried to grab it but when I did it flew away. I told my brother what happened andhe laughed.
 We went home after the bottle landed back down.
 ¨Want to do another one¨ I asked my brother. 
¨Sure¨ he said, and we both got back to creating one more rocket.

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My squad was going through a deep forest in China where a tree golem was said to live. Me and my squad of four were walking around when we heard a loud “THUMP”.
  We were all on high alert after that. We got our handheld recorder and camera. 
After a while of exploring we heard an even louder and closer, “THUMP” but now a roar as well. As we got even closer to the sound we hid behind a tree after seeing a humanoid figure of a tree. 
“I think we found it” somebody swallowed. 
“Yes. I think we did.”


Week 13 (21)
It was late at night at night but I was still awake. 
I had to get something to drink so I walked downstairs, and had some apple juice. 
I walked back upstairs to my room, and sat on my bed. Before I got settled down I heard something from my door, but it was just my cat. When I looked at her closer to see which cat it was, I saw I a light on downstairs. 
I didn’t remember putting it on, but I went downstairs and turned it off. Then I went upstairs and fell asleep with my kitten.


Week 11 (21)



It was the night we attacked the black castle near ours. They had picked the wrong spot to be as we were rolling barrels of TNT to blow a hole. We thought this was a crafty idea because the guards would think it’s a sheep, as we painted it white.
When we blew a hole in the wall, leaves flew everywhere in the air. When we got in they were all ready for us but we fought threw them. We defeated them and claimed their castle for our own and we went back to our castle to secure their treasury.

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It was just before school started and I headed out the door of my house with my umbrella. My mom said it would rain later. I got on my bus and left for school. It was another 6 hours of school again. After school let out I walked out the door when, I saw it was raining. 
I got my umbrella from my backpack and opened it. I started walking and suddenly my hands started to wobble and I fell. If only it was a bit smaller. While I got up I was pelted and mud stuck to my pants.


Week 9 (21)

It was a long day at the park. I was running, jumping, and playing around the playground so hard it felt like I was about to pass out.
I walked to the nearest bench and sat down. Thats when I saw the bee. I almost sat on it but it flew away. I thought it was gone but it came back to sting me. “Ow!” I whailed “It hurts!” I ran to my mom and told her I got stung. She said calm down and we have to visit the doctor, so I got in her car and we left.

Week 7 (21)


I rode my scooter down the road to my friend’s concrete house.

They have a cute fluffy dog which they usually dressed in a red dog costume

When I went inside their dog looked like it had just danced around the whole house.

We played outside for a while then I went back inside, I thought we only played for a hour or two but it was already 4:38 so I had to ride back to my house

“cya” I said

“can you come over tomorrow”? my friend asked

“yes” I said to my friend, and then I left.
Week 5(21)
It was a hard day for people in the castle as it was getting attacked. Enemies everywhere but people in the castle kept fighting, four people in particular. They mended a cannon and fired but they didn't know that would get them the win for the fight. They were firing the cannon balls when the king appeared, he shouted that the people surrendered. This was their only chance they aimed the cannon and shot the king. It knocked the king to the ground, they didn´t know if he was alive, but the falanx retreated and the people won the fight.

Week 4(21)


It was Joe's first day in 4th grade, and his first violin lesson, he was very excited. He walked to school and unpacked all his school things.

A few hours later his lesson came, and he walked to the lesson room, and got everything ready. When the lesson teacher asked everyone to get their violin´s out, everyone did right away especially Joe. When he opened his case he didn't see a violin but he saw a bruised green prickly pear. ¨ Why is this here¨ said Joe ¨I know but I want it gone next week¨ replied the lesson teacher.

Practice Week

It was a tragedy. Mike was biking down the road and hit a pumpkin. It sent him flying Mike was used to doing things like this but didn't anticipate a hay bale. Mike went head first into the hay bale and got stuck. He tried grabbing his bike but couldn't get a good enough grip. He was stuck. A few minutes went by and Mike didn't know what to do so he yelled “can anyone help me”. After a while a man came and saw Mike. The man tried pulling Mike out and, after a bit he got Mike out.

27 comments:

  1. I think it was really good I didn't really understand the end I had to reread it but other than that I thought it was really good.
    From Natalia Ortiz

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  2. I like how in the bigining you put "it was a tragedy"
    logan gates ges at fms

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  3. i like that you changed up your story a bit and added some pets and making it seem like it is happening right now.

    -Katherine

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  4. I like how you included a fluffy dog in your story! ~Lizzie

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  5. i like the dog and how did dressed from nathan

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  6. I like all of your so creative in your story's.
    logan gates ges at fms

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  7. hi!ari . the most part where is liked is the part where they fired the canon they did not know they would win but they won . so why i liked that part is because they did not know they would win but they won . so that is the part where i liked the most.-suzanna sara cherian

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  8. I love your week 11 story! Your character seems really strong to fight a army of soldiers! He must be really smart too to disguise the TNT! It is a really amazing story! Keep up the good work!!!
    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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  9. Amazing job on your week 13! It is scary but at the same time exiting! What was that? Oh, my cat. It is mysterious and pull readers in, making them want to read more! I can tell you put a lot of work into it!
    -Katherine Mae Trimarchi

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  10. I can totally relate to your week 10 mood Ari

    Great story

    -Connor

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  11. Your week 15 really made me feel happy. I love that you snuggle with your cat at the end, it is cute! Keep up the great work!🤩
    -Katherine

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  12. Week 17

    Hi Ari,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    Now that you've found the tree golem...I wonder what's next?
    Good work this week.


    Keep writing in 2021

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

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  13. Good job on the Week 18 action words!!

    - Elliott

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  14. ari week 17 was great
    logan gates

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  15. I like the week 9 at the park and bees Nice
    Mir Kara

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  16. Hey Ari! I like your week 20 cliffhanger ending!
    - JACKIE! :)

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  17. Ari,
    I really like your week 24 story! Its very funny, and I like how you started it off.
    Keep up the awesome writing
    -Gemma Sela,🌺

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  18. Ari, I liked your week 25 story. Especially when you left it on a cliffhanger.Keep on writing. -Theo c.

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  19. ari i really liked the week 27 keep up the good work
    jacob

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  20. I like your week 29 and how the guy got locked in the abandoned house that was a funny ending good job. mason

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  21. I really like how in week 29 you build up the suspense and at the end the sentence " walked to the entrance to leave, when I saw the locked door." Really made me want to hear the second part of this if there is one.
    ~Ellie (´・ω・`)

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  22. Ari, I really like your Week 29 piece! I really like how you incorporated the picture!
    - Elliott {Keep Writing}

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  23. week 29 was really good I can image how it would have looked like good job
    Lily

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  24. number 29 is so spooky

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  25. Number 32 is a very nice fantasy story.

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  26. The giant stone lighthouse seems very suspicious..

    -Dominic

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